I liked it!

I want to order a RON WEASLY unit! These are really good ideas!

xD That was hilarious!

-Heartsong;

It's nice that you wrote owner's guides for different stories! Hope you will continue doing so!

For Ron's guide as usual I laughed aloud at the "length"; his list of programming; the settings; the Q&A for the scratch marks for Ron.

As I have said before, I love it!

I love the owner's manuals of movie characters! Yours seems a bit too long though. You have an unnecessarily long "Relations with other units" part, telling everybody's roles, which we all know from the canon; and the FAQ and troubleshooting could be shortened. Also, if you want to imitate the genre, you might consider doing away with the "Erm.. yeah" and "well" and "Oops" remarks, these have no part in a thing called "Owner's Guide and Maintenance Manual". You're in a very tough competition here: did you know there are at least two other Ron Weasley owner's manuals on this website?

This is ok. To me, it didn't flow very well in the middle, but the begining and the end was funny. I really loved the troubleshooting ones! good job keeping to the books too. i rate this a 8/10.

A very hilarious story

This is great! I laughed quite a couple of times during it.

LOLS! That was hilarious. Love it!

Hey, Zen! I was reading this and cracking up, then realized it was you... Anyway, I LOVED IT! I couldn't stop lauging! You said there were others? Can I have the links maybe? Please? *puppy dog eyes* Loved it!

Lexy

Well, I can tell you that was interesting...BUT I LOVED IT! You have a unique way of putting things! well done!

lol. I was giggling the whole time I read this. :) great job, zen.

rai. :) (from FP.)

I love it! I want a RON WEASLEY unit! I'm so jealous! That was wonderful! Just one thing: I'm pretty sure Hagrid's dog is called Fang, singular, but that's not a big deal. Yay for Ron!

This is a great story, I love how you've captured the character of ron in this operations manual format. keep up the good work.