Reviews for The Conscience of the King

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Solitaire42 2008-08-25 ch 3,	abuseAgain, loved it so so much- absolutely adorable. I love that they're still being children in your stories (at this point, at least). So many stories, Peter and Susan adapt immediately, Edmund sulks for the first year or two, and Lucy just stays..Lucy. Well, a little less constantly Lucy. Fantactic!
spinningleaves 2008-08-23 ch 3,	abuseGreat stuff! It's so great to see conversations between the brothers from another perspective, and also to just watch them interacting. Wonderful!
myrmidryad 2008-07-15 ch 3,	abuselove it! ^^ so well-written and you kept to character really well! and i loved getting to know oreius.
rolletti 2008-07-08 ch 3,	abuseOkay, who are you really! Have you won a Nobel Prize for your writings because the more I read, the more amazed and in awe I am. This story is just so well thought out and executed. Hugs for you and thank you for sharing your AMAZING talent with us common folk. Because of you I have shamefully, spent $60.00 in ink and printed out, Into the West,They Also Serve,Heydensrun and Thole. I've lost count as to how much paper I've used, It's well over 600pages. (can we say Walmart) Now I can have my Narnia fix while I'm on break at work. YES! Ohh uh I hope you don't mind. I made sure to put your name beside the title, just in case some nosey person comes along and read over my shoulder. I can't wait till your next completed story. Rolletti
Siriusly Loopy 2008-06-03 ch 3,	abuseWhat brave sweetiepies!!
liz22463 2008-06-02 ch 3,	abusehaha! that made me feel warm and fuzzy on the inside!! :) so sweet. i still love edmund. he's the most complex out of them all
JaBoyYa 2008-05-25 ch 3,	abusethe ending scene was hilarious.
Ilada'Jefiv 2008-05-17 ch 3,	abuseWonderful once again! I enjoyed how this story was from Oreius' POV. It's interesting to hear other's opinions and thoughts of the children. Blessings! ~Ila
Enray 2008-05-12 ch 3,	abuseI feel like adding all the stories I read from you into the fav story list, but my list would grow so long... Your stories are highly entertaining. =)
White-Lily-Blossom 2008-04-22 ch 3,	abuseThis was so sweet! The ocean, Edmund and peter with the knotted laces, the ending... I just smiled through all of this. And you brought up a very good point about Tumnus - I've never thought of it quite like that.
Lothloriel 2008-02-21 ch 3,	abuseReally lovely, and a question resolved that's bothered me for a while. I love your Oreius. Calm, collected, and very real.
KCS 2008-01-21 ch 3,	abuse"Or if not common ground, General, at least something in common sprawled on the ground." Haha! Such a perfectly perfect sentence! Wish I had written it! Lovely story! -KCS
KCS 2008-01-21 ch 2,	abuse"I hear you. All traitors belong to her." - this, coming from the one who knew first-hand, was excellent. "I had never seen him so cross. It was rather impressive." Yeah, baby, I wouldn't make the High King ticked off at me - not the best idea in the world! I love the relationship you have made between Oreius and the kings - it's really spectacular.
KCS 2008-01-21 ch 1,	abuseAm reading this again, just for the heck of it. "Beside him, his brother the High King frowned slightly, his expression darkening when he noticed Edmund's reaction." Oh, yes, I definitely like the brother preotectiveness! I never thought of Tumnus before in that light - but I have to agree with you that he was a traitor, albeit of a slightly different sort.
Belle'srose 2008-01-12 ch 3,	abuseOf all the stories of yours ive read, there is a common thread that flows through them; while Peter, Edmund, Susan and Lucy are kings and queens you still give them a chance to act like the children that they are. I really enjoy watching them play and goof off with each other, yet grow and learn to be good rulers. Its a well balanced mix. Even when they have to perform some heroic deed or whatever, you still make sure we all realize that they are still kids doing what needs to be done. It makes it more believable when they arent perfect and proper all the time.

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