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avasion 2008-07-12 ch 1,	abuseaw, that's so cute. no, scratch that, wonderful. please write more!
Midori Konbu 2008-05-04 ch 1,	abuseI wonder how I never came across this fic... love it, even if there's no real pairing, it's still a warm and well-written story. I hope there'll be more coming.. someday? :)
o.o 2008-01-05 ch 1, anon.	abusewrite more!
J Luc Pitard 2008-01-03 ch 1,	abuseWonderful fic. I'll not worry about how she could find the graves since Aoshi buried them in some sort of "oni" forest. The story rests on the understanding between two people who understand loss and loneliness. I really enjoyed the way you connected them. One nitpick is the sentence near the end that starts with "No one could say how long she managed to stay awake..." It's a bit jarring as a change in narrative style. Kind of like a shift into a Christmas special. "No one could say where the magic came from..." The paragraph stands without it but then we'd lose her listening to his breathing so you could cut the top and get "Her muscles began to relax as she listened carefully to the rhythmic breathing of a nearby slumbering Aoshi." or some such. I know you wrote this a while ago and might not want to revise it, but I wanted to point out the sudden shift in tone. Nicely thought up and written. Aoshi and Kaoru make as unlikely a pair as Aoshi and Misao.
MiMi 2007-12-15 ch 1, anon.	abuseAwesome! I love this pairing!
IVIaedhros 2007-11-12 ch 1,	abuseVery nice oneshot of their interactions. The physical descriptions you painted were especially nice.
Piper 2007-11-08 ch 1, anon.	abuseExcellent work, very engaging, wonderful characterization.
JMai 2007-08-27 ch 1,	abuseaww... that's so sweet of Aoshi. It's really a shame that I didn't get to read this earlier. I never would have realised it was AK until I had a look at the AK community...which is a major loss on my part because this is one awesome fic! There aren't many fics keeping the original RK setting, so this was definitely a treat for me. I can't express how grateful I am that you wrote this...so Thank You!! -glomp- ^__^ It was a wonderful read, and very cute too...not to the extent of fluff but still very sweet. And I have to say, this is first for me to read this kind of storyline, so points for orginality too! I know this written ages ago, but I wanted to let you know how great a fic it was...it's a total shame alot of AK fans didn't realise it's existence. Anyway, enough rambling from me! Hope to read more of your fics soon. Ja ne!
Zerabell Blackborn 2007-01-23 ch 1,	abuseThat was simply beautiful. This is truly an example of why I ship these two characters. They both were both individual characters, and yet they resonated with each other so well. A marvelous job at writing, at keeping the characters so true to form… and at subtly drawing these two together in such a way I’d bribe you with cookies for more (if virtual cookies tasted anything like homemade ones that is). This has truly turned into one of my favorites. You wouldn’t happen to be thinking of writing more in this story line, or with these two characters as the main players are you? crosses fingers and hopes the response is a yes
Kura-sama 2007-01-12 ch 1,	abuseAww that's so sweet, Aoshi watching over Kaoru when she meant to be watching over him ^^ I guess its not that possible for you to write a sequal ...? This has such potential of a wonderful Aoshi/Kaoru pairing, any chance of that happening? Love the story. You're a great writer. Hope to read more soon ^^
Reality 2007-01-09 ch 1,	abuseaww!! How lovely! and sad cries I am so faving this.
toxiclollipop 2007-01-08 ch 1,	abuseI really liked this. It seems like its the start to an AoshixKaoru fic...which it probably is eheh ^_^" I still like it...and Im looking forward to more.
ChildlikeEmpress 2007-01-05 ch 1,	abuseAs a rule I usually can't stand kaoru/aoshi pairings, but you my dear have certainly gotten me hooked. I'm excited to read more so please continue!! I love what i've read so far. (:
Macve 2007-01-02 ch 1, anon.	abuseHiya! I like this one. Well, I've always liked AoshiKaoru stories ^^, but this one is simple yet sweet. Somehow though, I'm left hanging a bit, but I don't mind. ^^ Happy New Year. ^^
kk's lil chihuahua 2007-01-01 ch 1, anon.	abuseits really cool. The concept of their dark pasts and stuff. Keep up the good work. Happy new year/

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