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| Hana Dear 2007-01-03 ch 1, | abusei liked it. i'm warming up to the unconventional couple since i like those kind of pairings lol good job |
| Lie 2 Me 2007-01-02 ch 1, | abuseAww I loved it, even though Jay and Ellie didn't get the picture perfect happy moment it was still great. I really loved how it was in the past form and in the present form and how you kept them in character espeially at the last part that was very Jay like because Jay wouldn't have given in that easy. Loved it, make sure and please add it to the community. |
| SassySasha19 2006-12-30 ch 1, | abuseWow, real intense and pretty darn depressing. Great writing though, good job. |
| Richi03 2006-12-30 ch 1, | abuseThis was honestly amazing and so well written. You can feel Jay's pain through your words and I almost started crying when I got to the very end. Keep up the incredible work. |
| flowersinthespringtime 2006-12-30 ch 1, | abusewow.. now that.. that was so good. amazing. |