wish you would write more in the form of a chaptered story. this was extremely good story telling and very in character you wast your talent on such short work please write if not more chapters then more stories on a similar theme. again I enjoyed this imensly thought perhaps my spelling may be off lol

please if you would since you are this good at crossover will you please read my story Stargate secrets and let me know what you think?

yay! and first reveiw I might add! I like the sequel! And its nice to read your stories again.