MAKE THEM KISSAH!
PLEZ!! IM BEGGING U MAKE THEM KIS!
IF NOT I MIGHT DIE!!OH PLEZ JUST MAKE THEM KISS!!

Aww, Haru came back! That's great! Poor Kisa, left all alone with 'old people' as Momiji so kindly put it. I can't wait to see what happens next. Update soon!

If you don't write more soon I'll...I'll...I'll cry!! Now, I like this pairing, but sometimes I like just thinking of them as siblings that get a long, like me and my friend, Eric. He's Haru and I'm Kisa (for the most part. We have our moments when we hate each other too) I think that everyone needs that kind of relationship.
~Sanrio-chan

I'm curious so write more!!
~Sanrio-chan

Keep writing damnit! Anyway, that was good. I'm very happy with it ^_^
~Sanrio-chan
P.S. Keep writing!!

Haru is so cute when he's concerned ^_^ You're playing your character cards very well!! Good job. I love love love love this pairing. This has real feelings and emotions. Also deserving major kudos!!
~Sanrio-chan

This length chapter is fine ^_^ It's always really sad when people fell the need to go down that path...a girl at my school committed suicide in November with a gun. But at least it seems as if Kisa has a reason, but really there never it one. I mean, no one even knows why the girl at my school did it. ANYWAY, reviews are love!!
~Sanrio-chan

That was great! please update again soon! :)

That wasn't bad for a beginning chapter. I will come back to read more soon!
~~sanrio-chan

the riverdog part 1? where's part 2?

Interesting and rather touching...Keep on writing!This is great!KisaxHaru is a rarely seen coupling.

OMG! It's so sad...but also cute..I really ahd to keep ymself in check or I would have started to cry myself!*lol* I really feel with Kisa...being all alone now...everyone gone...feeling as if nobody cared for her anymore...*shudders* And the terrible feeling that that's what growing up is about. I mean if you think about families, they are close, brothers and sisters often really love each other but at some point they start to live their own life...and the bonds between them aren't as strong as they used to be...at least until they got used to the new situation...

I love how you discribe all these emotions and how you take your time , not rushing things. I am really curious if Kisa will tell him what she was about to do some time...and how he will react...actually I really wanna know how everything works out!:) Thanks for the story!

You are welcome! I think that it is a great idea to have Haru get depressed, because I really don't like Hiro that much...he can get kinda annoying...but he is nice to Kisa! And, even though I don't write, I think that if I did, I would love feedback, so people should review! Anyway, please update soon, and good chapter!

i really really like it. scratch that i luved it. please continue

Ahh! Noo! A cliffhanger! But that's ok, it make the story more exciting ^_^ I truly can't wait to see what will happen next!