very good! Here is a cookie for your muse hope it helps. Keep up the good work

oh very good! Nice job, keep up the good work you are a very good writer.

Well, thanks for the update. This is definitely keeping the pace up. More pls.

I really love this Archer/T'Pol story, I wish their were more of their stories to read. But thats to this story being long chapter wise, because I love long stories. Keep up the great story.

I've read all 70 chapters in a single day. Apart from some annoying formatting problems you seem to have, this story leaves me beg for more (and growl in frustration at the sudden end).
MORE! ASAP please!

I really loved this story so much that I went through all 70 chapters in one day. Keep up the great work, because I can't wait for the next chapter.

Very nice, well done! I hope r.l. get better for yo0u.

Hey, I love your story, sometimes I am a little confuse but i haven't seen the 4th season yet (they dont show it on tv here in germany -.-*) and I think that is maybe the problem. Hopefully you will updat this very soon.
bye nikki

Three cheers for AU!

Don't forget they have recors visual and such that can back up Trip
s explination even getting the Xindi to contact them, can help!

dennisud

Hope you don't mind me dropping in only once in a while; the chapters are short but tantalizing enough to come back for more. Reminds me of the Chinese Food cliche.

Great AU plot! Please more in-depth character descriptions on why and how they think/act. We've seen their actions, but why, their history and how they relate would give more dimensions. Keep slogging!

I like NATHAN AND dORTHORY. They say they love each other like best friends. Why did they not get a divorce then. I have never been married. It is on my list of wants thought. How did they both end up being gay?I liked the chapter. Bina

Love was not logical, but it gave one the clarity and the will to fight no what the odds. That was what u wrote, but that is not consistent with what u wrot ebout Trip aND tPOL.
bINA

Hello,
I like the story so far. Please let me know when you update. I rahter Trip and Tpol, but do not mind Tpol and Archer. I think it is funny that Nathan Samules, the president is gay. I do have some questions for you. I know this was part AU story. I think part of the distance between Tpol and Trip was cultural. I think in this story, Tpol still married Koss. But she was upset that Trip was so passive. I think maybe he thought he did not want to interfer in that culture, the Vulcan one. In the episode where she marries (and later divorces Koss) I think maybe Trip was 2 mature acting. Granted, Tpol did not love Koss, she should have defied her bethrothal more. I think that Trip did not know about Koonutkalifee. Koss would have kicked his ** if Trip had challenged him for her, or maybe gotten killed. She should have accepted MORE responsibility for the failure of that marriage.
While I really like TPol, I am not sure if I would agree she should come between Archer and Trip. EVEN briefly. The two Human males are long time friends, and Henry Archer was a hero to Trip. I am a girl myself, but I do not think that a girl should come btween two best male buddies.
Bina