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Ricky el ray is a moron 2007-11-22 ch 5, anon.	abuseDon't listen to ricky el ray, write whatever you ant, that's what an author is supposed to do oh, and btw, Oaf: n. A person regarded as stupid or clumsy. You used the word perfectly, apparently ricky doesn't know english
Raito Akuma 2007-10-26 ch 5,	abuseFantastic. I look forward to the chapters to come.
Hello! 2007-10-16 ch 5, anon.	abuseDon't listen to a thing RickyElRey says, apparently that person is a who gets their jollies from trying to bring others down, this is a great story, and RickyElRey is probably at their own lack of talent Great job, keep it up, and I look forward to the next chapter!
╣╣╣╣╣╣ 2007-10-16 ch 5, anon.	abuseUpdate Damn YOU!
RickyElRey 2007-10-13 ch 5,	abuseSophitia is nowhere near thirty. You might want to get your facts straight. But if you're gonna set the story 5 years after SC3, keep in mind that Ivy would be 37-ish.
RickyElRey 2007-10-13 ch 1,	abuse“Unhand me, you great oaf!” Wow, I found this quote ironic because Ivy towers over Siegfried. She's the one with the definite size advantage, not Siegfried. Also, did you give him super-strength or something? Seems like he completely manhandled her. Quite a strong grip for a little guy.
WOOO 2007-10-09 ch 5, anon.	abuseThank god, this isn't dead, NOW UPDATE! (ps. Thing Ziggy will stick to his ultimatum? I do want to see a little bit of caring on her part)
heaven-monument 2007-10-04 ch 5,	abusevery good chappy here. your brand of humour is well suited to this story... although the 'is your sword compensating for something?' joke has been made that many times it's getting rather old... but i think the follow up to that gag was good. i have one concern, though: i think sophitia is very OOC - in the game, she's not nearly as, um, frisky and playful. also, it mght have been better if you had left out the 'talk', as it was a little superfluous and tedious (it didn't explain much, IMO). good work anyway.
Pyro The Harbinger Of Chaos 2007-10-04 ch 5,	abuselol you going to post a M rated version of that scene on your da? Ah i like siggy i don't mind him really with anybody hells hes so awesome he could probably have a harem fic and id read it lol
wandering_warrior 2007-10-04 ch 5, anon.	abuseeye twitches DAMN THAT SIEGFRIED! He took Ivy's sword! and now he is having 'fun' with Sophitia. Ivy really needs to get back what is left of her sword and just leave Siegfried behind! sighs Ok...good chapter anyway. Update soon.
Yuko 2007-10-04 ch 3, anon.	abuse"The Spaniard" ! ¬_¬" Sorry to point out this mistake. Raphael is French.
Anon 2007-10-03 ch 5, anon.	abuseBravo, sir. Spot on characterizations, an injected past between two characters that _works_, and banter that actually doesn't sound contrived. Keep up the excellent work, I really want to see what happens with Ivy's pride and Siegfried's past. ~Anon
Markal 2007-07-18 ch 1,	abuseDON'T. EVER. LET. THIS. GO. UNFINISHED. Seriously. If there's something I hate worse than a bad fanfic that's been completed, it's a good fanfic that's been left uncompleted. This has enough good characterization to make Siegfried and Ivy actually feel human, instead of multi-polygonal models with nice texturing. Keep this one, and your other stories, going. If you ever, EVER let these stories go unfinished... ...I will find out where you live and send Bonta-kuns to lob smoke grenades into your bedroom.
NanamiYatsumaki 2007-06-11 ch 4,	abuseGreat job! keep up the work
Grabsalute 2007-03-23 ch 2,	abuseThis story is very good. Ivy without her sword is a very interesing plot device. The characters are really interesting.

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