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| YukinoKara 2008-07-11 ch 23, | abuseO_o ending the story with a cliffie...hoe mean DX ah well, it was a great story while it lasted, apart from the spelling and grammar ;) |
| YukinoKara 2008-07-11 ch 18, | abuse:D nice chapter XD I have to comment, this chapter was really well written. -a fan of CSI and Forensic Files |
| YukinoKara 2008-07-10 ch 4, | abuseROFLMFAO! lol, that was...interesting, but when Lust and Sloth came into the story it had me doubling over in manical laughter XD the spelling and grammar needs work, but it's a good story nonetheless ;) |
| Bar-Ohki 2008-05-19 ch 23, | abuseComplicated! I like. |
| Bar-Ohki 2007-06-04 ch 22, | abuseThis is rather interesting. I like it. |
| The High Demon Lord 2007-02-25 ch 15, | abusegreat story. Um... Could you do me a favor. Could you send the translastions of the poem on this page. I don't want to be a pain. I was just curious. |
| marufu-chan 2007-02-20 ch 11, | abuseneat chap |
| marufu-chan 2007-02-13 ch 10, | abuseneato |
| The High Demon Lord 2007-02-11 ch 10, | abuseGood story. |
| marufu-chan 2007-02-10 ch 9, | abuseO.o oh my cant wait for next chap |
| TOOL.2 2007-02-04 ch 1, | abuseLobe this so much! except the spelling. the spelling is making my head hurt. i want to whip out a red pen and correct everything! Still, i love it. Tool |
| marufu-chan 2007-01-25 ch 7, | abusecool chap though it was a bit different than what i exspected, it was still good cant wait for next chap |
| marufu-chan 2007-01-15 ch 5, | abusecool chap cant say much soryy keep up teh good wrk |
| marufu-chan 2007-01-08 ch 4, | abusecol chap its alright. though it was kind of disturbing, but keep up the good work. |
| marufu-chan 2007-01-03 ch 3, | abusei am glad you updated i like the chap. its alright i really didnt exspect ed to scream after seeing that, but if he had the dream envy had(the first one)he might scream ah well keep up the good work. cant wait till you update. |