Wow, very well done!

This is indescribably good. I really can't do it justice. It's one of those rare fics that explore the utmost potential of fanfic - show what it's all about, this kind of depth and perception, showing insight into an unnamed character and perspective, accompanied with professional-quality writing.

In essence, I really enjoyed it and found it deeply inspiring for my own work, really. I have that writing itch now.

Just one question - I still can't quite figure out how Priya died. How did she burn to death? Was it because she was frozen in the Muggle square with her wand in hand?

But I intensely love the culture in this; it's intense and deep, I feel like I've just absorbed so much of Indian culture.

Brilliant job, really.

This is really good. I don't know much about India, but it sounds like you know a lot, at least to a layman. Good character development, interesting plot, pleasantly mistake-free spelling and grammar ... it's great!

Wow, great story! I don't know that much about India, but I have a friend from India, and you really get into (from what I know) the culture and how they view everything that happens in the books. Great work!

No way!! My OC's name is Preeti too! This was really good. Hopefully you'll read mine too! Ciao!

wow- first take i've seen taking into account the patil twins' heritage- brilliantly done character piece :0

This was, in a word: excellent. This was an amazing look at Preeti Patil, and at the complex and multifaceted reasons as to why the Patil sisters were pulled out of school.

Your story-telling technique here was absolutely perfect. Even though I didn't initially know who all of the characters were, I felt engaged and prompted to keep on reading.

Your characterizations of Preeti and the twins especially, were astounding and extremely lifelike.

I can't think of any constructive criticism to give at all! Awesome, amazing, fabulous job on this.

Absolutely amazing! This character portrait could not be any better! Goes to show that humans are always humans, magical or muggle...

Wow... another amazing character sketch-type thing... wonderful. The wording, the images, the ideas.
Why aren't you published yet?
**Duckies

"that no nice Indian boy would torture and kill and invade the Muggle world for the sake of a petty immortality, when he should be striving for nirvana."

I'm trying to imagine Voldemort with a turban. Tee hee!

Great story! I imagine you had to put in quite a fair amount of research into indian culture and castes to have gotten it right. Good work!

Another one of your excellent stories. Nicely complex and multi-layered explanation for the presence of the Indian twins at Hogwarts.

very well written, totally unique:) thanks

this story is excellent. i love the style and tone. its very unique but very successful. good job.

I really liked this. Great job!