my god that was... wow! That was f-ing amazing i'm serious, I believe the fact you aren't getting as much reviews as you'd like is the not as much axelroxas interactions, add some flare and reviews will multiply 10fold!

Roxel forever

causing chaos since 1994

Wow.

I love this story.

Don't give up! It's great.

Just you wait, it'll catch on.

here's my DA -http:/thynocturne./

I added you to my friends list, stop by if you ever want to chat.

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YAYS! You updated! please don't stop! If you do I'll be forced hunt you down and read th other chapters you've written myself. It'll be a waste not to finish it!

Oh, Roxas in a skirt! Making Roxy crossdress is very entertaining, and skirts look good on him. Hehhe, can't wait till next chapter..

Ahh! This is really good! Poor Roxas though. Even I wouldnt go around wearing a sailor suit all day. Though(forget the fact hes a gaming character) I wouldnt mind having Axel staring at me. I really wouldnt. And for some reason, whenever you typed Dyme, it reminded me of Demyx. Demyx is so cool. You have to include him and Zexion in the story k? Not k? Okay maybe not. Though I still think its a perfectly good. . .I just lost the word that was in my mind. . .uh. . .um. . .pairup? Not the word I was looking for but it will have to suffice. Meh. Anyways, please continue! I look forward to reading the next chapter! Ooh, and how often do you update? Random I know. Are you one of the 'I write out of bordom' type writers, or do you make a definite time fo an update? Cos I really wanna read the next chapter. Really really. Keep up the good work!

XD I must say, from what I've read, this is going to be a very good story. Keep up the great work, I'll definitely keep reading.

Poor darling Roxas, forced to wear the schoolgirl outfit... Happens a lot, though, doesn't it? Cross-dressing Roxas? Well, it does in all of my stories anyway... XD

Anyway, I liked it, it was different from a lot of other stuff I've read recently!

-xiana

I like the idea of Larxene being ambitious. It's a little hard to tell with how little she actually shows up in Chain of Memories, but the fact that she's working under Marluxia-who's going against the Organization-in the first place indicates that she's not going to follow any old crowd. Only if she thinks it would benefit her, I'd guess.

And she's definitely a take-action kind of girl.

Can you tell I'm a Larxene fangirl? Haha.

Can't wait until Roxas shows up! ...And Demyx, too, actually.

-Blinks-

I like this. It shows a bit of potential in it 8D

It's really a pity that not many people have reviewed...

Ah well, I'm here teling you you're doing a kick-ass job at writing this and to demand that you keep writing.

I WANT ROXAS. NOW.

xox;;&-_Stealthe

HELLO! keep writing! im'a'rootin for ya! the fanfic is so cute!You're a good writer so never give up . ignore it if you get bad reviewers...they're just...evill...

so yeh..

Thats all folks! D

Intriguing so far. You do a nice job with Axel's perspective, and AU Larxene seems pretty in-character so far. That's tough to do, seeing as you can't really make her a total sadist in a normal setting, y'know?