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| sherluck 2008-01-16 ch 1,  | abuseCONTINUE PLEASE! i like the way you write... |
| Ligya Ford 2007-05-29 ch 1, | abuse"To be continued?" PLEASE!! |
| Allison Chase 2007-01-21 ch 1, | abuseThis is so good! You have to continue! |
| BookwormKiwi 2007-01-17 ch 1, | abuseHow ironic. I always find stories saying 'and thanks to crazy_loveHouse for betaing for me!' have the worst spelling/grammar, and those that call upon a beta are normally near perfect. You don't *need* a beta, but if one would make you feel better, drop me a line at But seriously, I don't think you need one. So, the story. I liked it. I'm not quite sure what the title has to do with it, but never mind. Quite a difference between the first and second part; I don't know if that was intended/noticed, but I saw it. Mega mega change of mo...no, not mood, more...intensity, maybe. I...dont' really know what else to say, because normally the rest of the review is constructive criticism, and I got none. Ok, I'll try and find some, just for you. Oh, I got something. Doesn't seem as much a problem for you, because you don't use it so often. ...that probably doesn't make any sense, don't worry. "Hello," House said. That's what it should be, rather than: "Hello." House said. You don't do it much, though, you're a bit more creative. Don't worry about it if you think you're right - hardly anybody listens to that piece of criticism (I'm beging I'm wrong...). Hope you like long reviews. Oh, and please continue. |
| Beautiful-Me89 2007-01-06 ch 1, | abusethis is pretty intresting.. can't wait for more |
| SpreadTheWord 2007-01-06 ch 1, | abusePlease continue! |
| Bec0512 2007-01-01 ch 1, | abusePlease continue You are a very good writer Rock on |
| KatieMalfoy19 2006-12-31 ch 1, | abuseDefinitely continue! I love this! There are definitely not enough Chase/Cameron fics so this one is a welcome addition! Please update really soon! ~Katie~ |
| jane's membrane 2006-12-31 ch 1, | abuseYes continue. Like now. Please. Don't make me hound you. :) |
| fluffy2001 2006-12-31 ch 1, | abuseOh yes, please continue. As another writer of the small supply of Chase/Cameron fics, I always like to see more. I like what you did here! |
| heather1021 2006-12-31 ch 1, | abuseoh plz continue! i like it. you're right. there aren't enough chase/cam stories out there. |
| PartayyyyLikeARockstarr 2006-12-31 ch 1, | abuseyes continue! love it! |
| Merlin71 2006-12-31 ch 1, | abuseI love this. I love how descriptive you are. YOu made me feel the heaviness pushing against Chase. It was perfect. I really REALLY hope you write more of this. Lots more. I'll beg... |
| Talisman110 2006-12-31 ch 1, | abuseYes, please continue. I enjoy your style of writing and Chase/Cameron is always appreciated. I love the angst as well. Please continue. |
| MyImaginary 2006-12-31 ch 1, | abuseAw, I love the thought of Chase shirtless. *Drools* *Think pure thoughts* Anyway, I think it's very cute. And very well written. WRITE MORE! :) |