Please update it's good!

*screeches* WHY DIDN'T YOU TELL ME YOU WERE WRITING A NEW STORY! It rocks, btw

Interesting idea, nice work so far.

I have to admit I wouldn't have read this unless it was a request. However, it's a very good start. I'd like to see how this develops ^_^

Interesting start, this could be really good! It was pretty in character too! Keep going!

-Penguin Girl (!)