hahahaha what a reaction...hm i think i'd of done the same thing though, i'd love to read more of this so update soon ok i can't wait to read how the two of them really come together

I LOVE THIS STORY!!
it's so cute and funny
i must bow down in front of you for helping me find cloudxriku it's just perfect!
please update as soon as you can cause i just can't wait to see wat they're going to do!

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This story is great so far! Your work is amazing...have you ever gotten anything published? I wouldn't be surprised if you have. I think you're much better than me, and I've won a few awards...oh well! keep writing or I'll run you off a bridge with a motor home!

I lvoe it so far! Please update soon ^^

updat this soon

:D
Yay! BL~~
Can't wait for the next chapter.. Whenever that will be..
Nice!

so cute please more

*pets cloudy*

*doglike puppy whine* I don't like ebil zacky. *hugs her cheerful and loving version of Zack*

Can I hit yours over the head with an aluminum baseball bat when your done with him? *hopeful look* He's EEVVIILL.

Thank you for the update~ Love it! ^^ Love, love, love! ^^ *grin*

i think i have reread this a good 20 times. it is so cool. i love it! long live yaoi and down with the people that hate it in my opinion. this story is so good. i think you are doing a great job. please continue! i happily and anxiously await the next chapter!...

I am so glad that this story is being worked on again.
This chapter is very nice. The characters are entertaining, and some interesting points are made.
I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

Okay... hurry up and update. Soon. Jesus, is Zack an asshole. Man, I always liked him but now... *imitates Borat* Not so much. Well, c'mon!! I need more fanfiction to read and some seriously hot RikuxCloud!!

Yay!! Sora's gay and Cloud's finally in the freaking loop!! *slobbers* Uber hotness on Cloud's part too...

Okay, the "I love you part" was so OOC... XD but cute and I loved it. First time I've ever read this pairing... Personally I'm an AkuRoku SoRiku kinda gal... as per my fanfiction XD but I saw you updated something and thought I'd give it a try. I'm glad Cloud's book is angsty, if it were humor I don't think I could've read this heh O.O So write more!!

Yes.

That is just abosolutely fantastic.

Awesome. Yes. Definetly.

>_<

Riku's so bossy in here, I love it! And I'm glad you're updating too! I love this story. :3

*bliss*

Woohoo! Yay for updates! I had a horrible day today (all because of a certain English boy-wizard), so it was nice to come home to an update after 8 hours of hell. I'm so glad you chose to update this. It really is one of my favourites of yours. Now all we need to do is get these boys some money and then throw Riku and Cloud in bed. And by we I mean you! lol I love this so much and I'm really starting to enjoy Sora's character. He's so blatant and straight forward, but freakin' funny too. I can't wait for more! ^_^

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