interesting. what year is this set in? i want to know more. update soon!

Sorry that I don't like it :( ... but keep writing!

very very very good.

Hey, that was cool! I found the line near the end amusing...the one that went:Sirius sat back in shock. Here he was, the most wanted criminal in the world, being offered a job at the most famous wizarding school in the world, overseeing Quidditch matches and teaching kids how to fly.

That killed me, I'm still laughing about it...

Aloha oi... I'm gonna go bug Kari about finishing this one. WAKE UP KL and get this thing finished, you lazy daughter-of-a-witch! Get up off your tail and write!

I love this story and there is no second part? Makes me sad :*(

MORE MORE MORE

i want more on this up! NOW!

Interseting. Write more soon. Nemo.

Well, it was very well written - sort of in the style of the guy who wrote 'Even Cowgirls Get the Blues,' 'Still Life with Woodpecker' and 'Jitterbug Perfume' - whatever his name was. You pulled off the author insertion very well. The only question is, is Sirius going to be brought into the school under his real name? If he was, then how are they going to work it? The Ministry will find out. I'll be reading the next chapter.

This is an awesome story. One of the most enjoyable I have read in a long time. Please please write more, soon.

Quite good job, and 'K. L. Rawling' is a nice twist. ;o) A bit implausible, though.

Great story! That was really cool! Check out my stories.

Wow! I realllllly liked this. One of the best I've read. Can't wait till part 2. Also- love the play on words with KLR

NEAT IDEA! I especially like the lucky card. *ponders* Now **I** need a lucky card...hmm...