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| Quaxo 2008-04-17 ch 1,  | abuseLovely. Absolutely lovely. I shall rip out my pages of Deathly Hollows and replace it with this snippet of awesomeness. |
| o0Anonymous0o 2007-08-18 ch 1, | abuseVery eloquent fic. The ending is perfect for Snape. |
| holly bergman 2007-05-28 ch 1, | abuseAbsolutely perfect. It's been done Salazar knows how mant times but you've done it perfectly. |
| Marina 2007-02-26 ch 1, anon. | abuseI loved! It's so deep about the characters, so true... Oh, perfect! Really good job! |
| minniequill 2007-02-09 ch 1, | abuseThis is brilliant. Truly wonderful. |
| anna2 2007-02-03 ch 1, | abuseLovely. Now go finish Subtle Existance. Some of us are desperate. |
| excessivelyperky 2007-01-11 ch 1, | abuseLovely! I hope Snape survives long enough to tell his story, without us having to find it out posthumously. (though Harry will get over any guilty feeling in about five minutes; he's good at that). |
| Brenda Shaffer-Shiring 2007-01-10 ch 1, | abuseI like it. It's stark and vivid, stripped of everything but the essentials. The characters' voices are perfect. The only quibble I would make is that, in such a short story, it might have been best to stick exclusively to one point-of-view (especially since so much of your p.o.v. was already Snape's). In my experience, that tends to unify short prose. |
| LadyErinSnape 2007-01-09 ch 1, | abuseWhile I agree that it has been done before I don't think I have read it with this angle before (and I've read a lot of Snape promises Dumbledore fics). The point isn't that it's been done before but how you tell it and this was written well. Minerva's grief and anger were in character and charged with raw emotional power. "What a perfectly damnable time to become noble." |
| Silverthreads 2007-01-09 ch 1, | abuseHow many times have artists painted a simple vase of flowers? Many times. It isn't the number of them that is important but the quality. This vignette is sufficiently well done an exercise that I would compliment you on it. |
| ICRepresentative 2007-01-08 ch 1, | abuseWow. This was brilliant. Well written! I've heard thousands-upon-thousands of theories and seen the copius number of fics churned out on this topic but you've very masterfully given such a tired idea new life. You've got a great grasp of language which you use brilliantly. I love your work, and I hope to read more of it soon! |
| fire-forged 2007-01-04 ch 1, anon. | abuseI liked it! so what if it has been done before, this was definately one of the better ones...really good... |
| Iva1201 2007-01-03 ch 1, | abuseI have written a similar story - well, at least the main characters were same and the musing similar. What I however wanted to tell is 1) this is a good one, really and 2) there are no dozens of fics like this. Yes for Snape and Hermione, Draco or Harry dealing with the aftermath of Dumbledore's death but Snape and McGonagall - 15 times maybe and half of it good? (-: |
| AdamiRose 2007-01-03 ch 1, | abuseIt may have been done before, but it is always done slightly differently. I like it. You capture the characters well. |
| Zoeteproet 2007-01-01 ch 1, | abuseAww, you don't deserve flames, although this has indeed been done lots of times, I really liked it. It was well (very well *wink*) written, and the explanation for Severus'innocence is very realistic. (I'm convinced Severus is innocent, anyway). |