I've got to say this story threw me a bit especially the ending I won't ruin it just in case someone reads the review first. Good stuff though I gotta admit really didn't see that one coming.

Hello, I’m Dr. Smith”, and “oh, the pain!

DANGER WILL ROBINSON! DANGER! DANGER!

bah dump bump, pist! (drum and rim shot)

OY!

Great work on Kim and Ron. I'll watch to see if anything comes of it.

What's with the "evil plot bunnies"? Nice story, but does it have to be bunnies? Why not a cat, or dog, never mind.

Good one. Ron must have practiced real hard, to have gotten past the mouse. Maybe he used cheat codes, or Wade hacked the game?

I'm not familiar with the joke you're referring to. Maybe it's just an American thing. I didn't get the 'oh, the pain'. The again, I can be a little slow at times.

That was odd i don't get the joke. but the ending was unexpected and left me scraching my head

Well, it's clearly an irrisponsible thing for Kim's dad to do; although, I'm still not completely sure of why he got beat up in the first place. I assume that it's because there WAS a Dr. Smith there finally, but I can't really be sure. It was at least an amusing part. _ Anyway, thanks for posting this. It really was interesting.

great one, i enjoyed reading it.

‘Refer to Dr. Smith.’

Now that was funny, it was a good plan to have that high drama off the start with the call to Kim and her and Ron helping those kids stay calm. Then to have Mr.Dr.P felled by his own laziness (a la Ron) makes the end a laugh riot.

Thanks for the great read!

Ha! I always wondered why Doc Smith went bad and now I know! Bad Mr. Dr. P for trying to palm off his work to someone else at the MSC! Still, he got what he deserved.

This was a lovely story with lots of nice Kim & Ron character moments. I think that you caught all the characters pretty much perfectly. Well done on a good job!

BenRG's Rating: 8/10

Both a funny and sad story. That's what Mr. Possible gets for making some else do all the work he doesn't want to do. I really like how you showed Ron as being laid back but a the same time helping keep the situation calm. Good story. If you give my stories a read review and tell me what you think.

ARGHH! HE... HE GOT ME PARDNER! ;D

Love It.

MK2

the sheep are running tonight:

BAD!

it was so bad, it was good!

Thanks, Pharoah, and on that:

Hava a Happy and Prosperous 2007!

BOOYAH!

Oh you just had to bring in "Lost in Space's" Dr. Smith, didn't you? Never saw him getting physical through. Heck of a gag you put out there on us all...

What else is coming out from you? Can't wait.

CB73