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| Riana1 2007-08-15 ch 1, | abusePerfect for Donny. |
| Gijinka Renamon 2007-03-12 ch 1, | abuseNot bad, not bad at all. |
| Donnie-o 2007-01-15 ch 1, | abuse*whew* Must say that I was worried. Interesting musings on Donatello's unfortunate circumstances. I really feel like they needed to have more closure for me with Good Genes. Wonderful thought. It's pretty true that everything comes from somewhere... even the most mild-tempered person can loose it. Porr Donnie didn't have a choice though. Well done! |
| innocent-rebel 2007-01-09 ch 1, | abuseWow. That was...awesome, beauitful and deep. Wow. |
| BubblyShell22 2007-01-08 ch 1, | abuseWonderful introspective on Don's mutation. I loved every minute of it. Great job. You are a good writer. Write more good stories soon. The Bubbly One, Shell |
| pacphys 2007-01-02 ch 1, | abuseOoh! Nice!! I really like this. It started out like it was going to turn angsty then you pulled a fast one on us! Wonderful little story! Cheers, ~pacphys~ |
| Okami1 2007-01-01 ch 1, | abuseWow...just wow. What a great insight into Don. The thought had crossed my mind that when he became Gameradon he kinda snapped, letting go all the anger he never showed before. Anyway, great fic. I'll have to read more from you. ^_^ |
| Jessiy Landroz 2007-01-01 ch 1, | abusesimple and to the point, I guess~ kind of a nice touch at the end with the part before they were attacked by the Tribunal's Mokujins(or at least, that's what I think they're called), and I guess even though Don played 'monster' with Mikey on that rooftop, he still wasn't completly sure about it all... In a way, he's probably thankful for the Tribunal kidnapping them, cause it distracted them/him from thinking aboutit and all, huh? |
| EveryDayPerson 2006-12-31 ch 1, anon. | abuseNice introspective piece! |