Oh, how I wish you would update! You're story is simply amazing!

What is so bad that Fai has to leave Kurogane?

Please, oh please update!

This is really interesting, will there ever be anymore??

I hope so...

You write Fay and Kurogane so well it's ridiculous. Your character insight is top notch. The setting is creative and dynamic, opens up a lot of possibilities, especially with the little crossover you've got going on. I love this. Please continue ASAP.

omg, this fic is adorable. so angsty... makes the fangirl in me squeal so much :D

i love reading stuff in this mutant universe. what happens in vermont is already outlined in ur other fic, but i still want to see what happens, and how kurogane and fay interacts, and where did they go after dropping that one kid off at the hospital, and why did fay recognize the twins, etc.

but the angst! i thought sasuke had it bad, what with itachi ruining his childhood and all, but fay's past is even more dark and confusing... and i keep wondering who's more powerful, fay or bunchu or itachi... and i wonder if sasuke can copy kurogane's talent...

anyways, love this story; this fandom/pairing needs/deserves a larger following...

GASP. I love this. Continue please? (It's a big departure from the lengthy reviews I usually write but we'll just chalk it up to reading this story and having all brain cells momentarily shut down.)

You have a wonderful writing style, I like the amount of detail that you put into your story. I think you did the time jumping well, always hinting when the time frame shifts. I love how you've characterized Kurogane and Fay. You've done an amazing job with this story, and I hope to see more soon.

ahh...the two he met were kakashi and sasuke. had to be. i am not familiar at all with the tsubasa chronicles, but i saw one of your amvs...sleepless i believe...on youtube and just had dig into this.

and goodie there are three more chapters!

i wonder what fay is running from...or from who? and why does kurogane continue to go after him?

tri

You have my sincerest apologies. My router is acting up and I've been so busy, I forgot that I forgot to review this chapter. (head-desk) I'm usually more prompt with reviewing but this completely escaped my mind...

So Ashu-Chan...died...? (sighs) That's such a shame, I love him so much! XD I'd assume Fai to be more traumatized than what he came out with the things he went through. When are we going to see Kuro's past...? (niiko)

The visions of Kurogane talking to a wall are so amusing! He's just lucky he wasn't in a mental hospital because then they might've taken Kuro in. (heh)

It's so hard to portray all the would-be, tender moments running through my head when I look at the genre and see the, 'angst,' there... Ah, but I still get fuzzies anyways. It kind of makes the sweet-ness that lasts now even warmer. (sighs)

Why must this story be so perfect...? It's only making the waiting between chapters worse. (impatient person) x3 Horrible review this time, so like...feel free to delete the review or something, but this chapter made time stop for me. (grins)

~B.T.A. Ria-Chan is exploding like fireworks~! (boom boom)

OMG no more?!? Gimme more! That fic is so great! ToT

Best AU ever.

It was so unique, so wonderful and so _them_. I love their interaction, you capture so well their problems and conflicts and you did a great job puting them in this AU.

Please continue! I would love to see the first time they had sex. XD

Ohh...! Very nice!^^ I eagerly await the next chapter!

I'm honestly astounded this fic doesn't have more reviews. This is one of the best AUs I have ever read and still very IC, but better because we can see Fai's stronger, slightly darker side that he shows every now and then in the manga and no-one really shows that in fics, but you're doing so well.

I'm a mod at the kuroxfai community on Livejournal [dot] com. I - for one would love to see your stories posted there.

I loved it ! The story of Fye seems very interesting, and I love their relationship. It's different from their relationship in the manga, but gives the same impression of an eternal game of hide and seek. And it seems even more helpless than the one in the manga ...