Good story!

Interesting story. Although, a couple of questions come to mind: why can everyone see the thestrals? The kids shouldn't be able to at this point. And, if there is a blood adoption, what happens to the House of Potter? The blood adoption may solve the Gaunt problem, but if it gets rid of all other lineages, doesn't the Potter line go, too?

I'm quite interested to see where this leads- I'm curious to see if the future will keep changing . . . I hope it does, otherwise we already know what will happen!

this chapter made me really like and respect Narcissa- such a cool and powerful lady!

Whoa...now, how old is Harry? Looking forward to more. Thznks

madam bullstrode and her husband are HORRIBLE...good thing grandma snape stepped in

love the story please update as soon as you can!

Narcissa should be arrested, and put in a mental asylum for thinking herself so god-like and perfect. Snape has every right to defend his son so, and she will probably risk Harry's life with the information she holds. She had no right to react as she did, or to set up Snape unwillingly and force him to get married.

I was quite pleased when I came across this story to see what an excellent writer you are, and I'm surprised I haven't read any of your work before, since I always look through the 'favorites' of authors I read. The only fault I can find is that you may need a beta to look the chapters over before they are posted, because I've run across quite a few sentences that have words missing or extra words added by mistake. Also, sometimes I have a little trouble following the characters thoughts, they get a little too mysterious concerning what's happening or going to happen. You usually explain it within the following chapter though, so I don't have to struggle to understand their reasoning for very long. Your idea of Dumbledore using the time-turner to see the future is very original and interesting. Your use of back story to show how Tonks could be interested in marrying Snape really helped me to reconcile that relationship too. I think you have really fleshed out the backgrounds and thoughts of all the main characters, except maybe Lucius. He's still a bit of a questionable character, but I'm sure you want us to wonder about him. I hope you can keep working on this story. If you need ideas you can always ask your readers, but I think you're doing a fine job on a complex and enjoyable story line.

I think it's just well neat

Most excellent!! Poor Millie. She really isn't that bad of a person.

You can't help but feel so sorry for Millicent.

Please can you stop Millicent from drowning. I didn't like her at the beginning of the story, but I have come to like her. How much do she and Harry like each other though? It has become a bit confusing on that point.

Please update soon.

This is brilliant man! Daring imagination, and fitting implementation!

As another with more work than time, I appreciate your efforts whenever you can. Your story is so intricate that I am sure it takes a lot of plotting, and I look forward to seeing where you go.

Thanks for updating.

Good little part there, though felt bad for Millie there, and would be nice to see her catch a good break, though will not be looking forward to how Narcissa takes this insult.