I LOVE YOU, I DON'T CARE THAT IT WAS SHORT...I AM JUST HAPPY THAT YOU UPDATED THIS.*smiles*

Heyaa darl, long time no see, hope that you updats this soon though! Nice chappie - pur Kazutaka is afraid! Can Tsu help him?

Yeah! About time this fic was updated...I was beginning to lose hope.

Thanks for remembering this story as it is quite interesting and disturbing. Poor Kazutaka! I hope Tsuzuki protects him! Try to keep RL at bay and continue this story! I'll get quite upset if you don't...

Take care!

wonder what's behind that door! please update soon!

too short but i still luv it update soon

now i'm going to be wondering for the longest time until you update what could have possibly been behind that door. is whatever pushed muraki over the edge behind that door? did that little freak Saki do something horrible. i hope the
next update isn't too long in coming because i am dying to see what happens next.

oh yeah forgot to mention this but:

I thought chapter 13 was good!

Especially the cliff hanger!

I was willing to bet that Ukyou would come into this story!

so yes I honestly think that you did NOT rush. It was perfectly fine.

and because of the cliff hanger I want to read what happens next pretty badly ^_^

PLEASE update! I know it's been a couple of months but PLEASE PLEASE update!

I LOVE this story! It's very emotional!

please keep writing I really do love it! I wanna see what happens next!

Keep going ^-^

Still love your story! I wonder what's going to happen next! Keep it up! I love the whole thing with the demon, I thought about it some and I have read a few theories on it, but I like your most. ^^ Ja!

DMK

Aw I want Muraki rescued!

I think this chapter was very interesting and I didn't find it boring at all. I hope they can save Muraki and Tsuzuki. Oh-oh, Ukyou is in the picture. Now that should be interesting. Can't wait for an update. :D

Okay, let me just be the first to say, Muraki's mother is hot. Secondly, very touching scene, when Muraki's mother slinked in I wasn't very sure what to think at first but the interaction between her and her son was very sensitive, I couldn't help wondering how it could all go so wrong. I'd never seen comparing someone to a doll as positive in anyway, and although it still had a slight sinister edge to it here, you made it very sweet here, and I also liked how enthuisastic little Muraki was about the flaws in he's doll.

I know I'm supposed to be hankering for more, and I kind of am, but I like the fact you left it on this cliff hanger, I also liked how you considered all the possible candidates instead of just predictably sending Tsuzuki straight in. I'm anxious to know what you have in store for Tsuzuki in Muraki's consciousness, cause god help as all if a powerful demon takes possession of that *scary* mind. Only chapter four will tell.

Oh wow, liked how you kept the tension going throughout the chapter, learning about the demon this way really adds a detail to the story and makes it seem more authentic.

Oriya's last words as well, really set the mood.