Very, very nice ending. Great story!

We are the hollow men indeed.

awsome story. but sad ending. and nice characterization

This story was just... wow. Really good!

Aw man, that was so sad! Makes me feel sorry for John. I wish it had ended differently, cuz I love happy endings but I think then it would have been OOC. A beautifully written story, thanx!

Wow. Just...wow. This was a really brilliant fic. You've provided such an amazing insight into Pyro and Mystique, and I have never read a fic with this kind of premise before. It was just amazing.

Wow. :)

Oh! That was way cool! ]

Maid of the Mer

Wow, I've never read anything like this before! What a unique storyline. You wrote Pyro's character really well, and I liked that there was just a little bit of humanity in him. The end really did shock me!

"It was deceiving, the fire. It pulled you in with its promise of warmth and comfort, then it burned you and destroyed you."

That was my favourite line.

Well done!

Whoa. I'm kinda shell-shocked here. Definately was not expecting that ending, though I guess I should have. You write John so well! I'm, again, in awe. But... the puppy? Was just taking it's first breath when you kicked it.