I like your original character and how everyone seems to be exceptionally critical of her. Especially how you hold her in relation to Naruto and Sasuke, and her inward struggle for recognition even though she seems depressed.

Out of all the fics though, I can't say I hold too strongly to this one as of right now. It's not the plot, nor your descriptions... it's the changing of the POV. It kinda gets hard to follow. I know you're trying to put in other characters experiences and such (I used to do the same thing when writing), but sometimes their interactions with Yuni (from her POV) will do more. I learned that it's most effective to bind the reader when about 3/4th of the material is from the protagonist's pov, or at least the two most prominent characters in the story.

You've got the ability and it seems as though you've got a good direction to where it's going. I'm still interested in reading the next chapter :D I really want to learn more about Yuni and her abilities, especially after reading "Fifty Aspects of Pain." And of course, her interaction with Hidan!

Geez girl! Are you EVER gonna be happy with this story?! What is this, the fourth or fifth time you've re-written it? It was fine the first times! Leave it be. Just tell me what happens after the learn how to climb trees.

Ah yes, the chapter I've been waiting for: Sakura's arrival! I like the Chakra Notes, it was nice addition to the 'tree-training'.

Wot! That was a really good story! I loved it! That chakra type was really unexpected! Keepup with the good work! AND PLEASE UPDATE SOON IM DYING TO FIND OUT WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!

Unique prologue. I'm very interested to see how you will explore the concept of 'shinobi'; I feel that it's often a subject that many people gloss over and romanticize, like you said.

Not going any further after this (it's 12:30 here haha) but adding this to my alerts and will read in the future. :]

Gagh, sorry for the ultra late review. I've been busy with school and finals and stuff.

Nice, nice, nice. For some odd reason, the interaction between Sakura and Yuni amuses me. And I like how you made her [Yuni] pretty realistic, especially with the jealousy.

Just curious, but when you said magnetism has potential to control all the elements, how would it control things such as earth or air?

It took me a while to finally get around to reading your new revised story, and now that I have, I'm glad I took the time. I was slightly worried at the begining, thinking that you had changed it too much from the original. But, I'm proud to say, I was extremly surprised. It is so much better, and although it has the same base as the original, it's an entirely new story. It's bloody brilliant. I hope you update once more soon, lest I not be able to read for a long time again. I look forward to it.

This chapter was definitely worth the wait! I like your take on the tree-climbing training. As in the previous chapters, you write the interactions between the members of Team 7 really well. (I almost wonder if Sasuke is going to end up with a crush on Yuni simply because she's the only girl in the village who treats him normally.) Can't wait to read more!

Magnetic chakra. Did not see that one coming.

Awesome! I'm flattered really... I'm just a Naruto-nerd is all. Nothing special... Thanks for the praise anyway. This chapter was good, I liked it alot, but there was something else... Oh, right, what about their first combat experience? Where's Sasuke going to activate Sharingan? Naruto use the Kyuubi for the first time? Will this not happen until the Chuunin exams?

Hm...how interesting. Just one question: when does Sakura come in again?

Ooh, Yugito showed up! And she's going to the Wave Country too--wonder if she'll run into Naruto and Co.? Nice chapter.

OMG so awesome is the developments you have introduced. I'm liking this very much. Keep up the awesome work, I look forward to seeing how this changes the Wave Arc.

... I am lost. xDD
I better go and catch up on the latest manga, nes pas?

But despite that, good, real good. It was shorter than I expected so by the time I scrolled to the bottom, I was, "wtf." but that's okay. xDD

... I'm not going to bother counting to OCs because I won't be able to distinguish which are OCs and which are cannon. A wild guess would be, eh, five.

Wow. Just...simply amazing. What a cliffhanger, huh?