This. must. be. the cutest Zemyx story i have read this week! It's great~!

Aw, that was so cute. I love cute!

I love this! It's so absolutely gorgeous and adorable. Zexion's letter was so intelligent but cute at the same time. x3 You're a lovely writer.

This story was so sweet... when I read what Zexion had written, tears actually came to my eyes, and I was cooing like crazy.

All hail Zemyx--one of the best couplings known to mankind~

Cuz Demy + Zexi = Love!!

I luffs it.

Aw That was cute =) Zexion, in my mind, would defiently overreact lol ^^

Im sorry, but this just needs to be said!
Aw!
Phew. Thats over.
Lovedy dovey, hunky dorey fluff! ^-^ The best kind ever!

This was adorable! I loved it!

If it wasn't so late and I wasn't so tired I'd give a full critique, but sadly it is late and I am tired, so no.

I have one little thing. Zexion's speech. From what I'm told, in Japanese Zexion used the Formal speech type, which is hard to pull off in English without the character coming off as a total prick, but with Zexion being informal is out-of-character.

“You’re going to have to speak up.”=“You are going to have to speak up.”

“… M’sorry…”=“… I am sorry…” Always always always. “… M’sorry…” is just so informal out soo not Zexion.

“Hey Dem? Y’know… you’re the only one I need too…”=“Demyx? You know… you are the only one I need, too…” Hey is also too informal for Zexion. In japanese that's like saying "Arigato" ("Thanks"/the most informal thank you) where "Doomo Arigato Gozaimasu"("Thank you Very Much"/Most formal thank you) is due, or saying "Ohayou" ("Good morning"/informal) to a teacher when "Ohayou Gozaimasu"("Good morning"/formal) is correct.

omg that made me cry!!
It was soo cute!

That was so cute and awesome... XD

Aw! How adorable!

aww, it's so cute. i love it. i love this pairing too.

Aw...demyx is so cute!

yo, wat up? AW this is so kawaii... which on is zexy again? I cant ever remeber all the organzation... ^_^* is Demyx the one with the water gutars?? anyway u rock! later

Cute very cute it's going on my favs! ^.^