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Reviews For: Ammunition

dylanredefined 2008-07-20 ch 7,	abuseIts well written ,but, The tortured sniper is a bit of a cliche .Kurz is a mercenary working for an orgnisation which prides itself on being the good guys.If he had a problem with killing don't think he would last long in the job. Sometimes all you feel when you pull the trigger is recoil.He may not actually have any hidden depths .
Midnight Mystique 2008-01-24 ch 6,	abuseI really liked the way you wrote the drabbles! You really dig into each character's soul and see what should be exposed to us readers!
turquoisewaters 2007-05-22 ch 5, anon.	abuseyou have a nice style of writing, and your drabbles aren't half-bad. Keep it up!
Eastern Cat 2007-01-15 ch 2,	abuseWhere to start? No, no, no it's not bad, but really are you a pro who stumbled here? Because your writing sure makes it look like that. Usually I jump over really short stories with no reviews saying that the author is probably some author-wannabe. Sadly in many cases that's the situation. But this is definitely not one of those cases. Actually it's rare to find someone on who really tries to add emotions, and symbols to their work, and here is one that basically consists of those things missing from this site. Great writing, I hope to read more from you soon! See ya!