Reviews for Back Until Sunset

Reviews For: Back Until Sunset

katiesparks 2007-11-24 ch 1,	abuseOh,wow.That was awesome! I loved the one where Ran and Shiho switched, truely amazing,really! LOVED IT!
Aliora 2007-01-05 ch 1,	abuseAw, you are always more than welcome. And you are always such a good and fast beta that it's the least I can do repaying the favour in kind. As a few people have said already, an awesome fic. Even though I don't know the characters, I was part of their world(s) for a little while, and I think you really succeeded with setting a scene here. You played around with styles and I think the fic is the better for it, and there are some chilling, poignant lines that will live on once the story is done. Love that "breathe in, breathe out" part, and all those other bits I pointed out when I went through it. Congratulations on a wonderful success with this story - I'm glad the months of effort paid off. :D
Jinnai 2007-01-05 ch 1,	abuseI liked it.
Miyano Ran 2007-01-03 ch 1, anon.	abuseI think my favorite is number IV, if Shiho's parents were alive. It is because it is nice to see Shiho living happily with her family, ( well, maybe not really happy because of the Organization and all, but, at least they suffer together as a family, right? )I like the part where they live together as a family, but, the ending was sad. They died! Wha! ( Tears ), at least, in her real life, even though she was an orphan and her sister is dead and she has no more family, at least she can stand as the LAST MIYANO. If the story that you wrote came true in her life, they might be happy at first, but at the end there will be no more people with the surname MIYANO living in this planet because they can reproduce, they are already all dead after all. So, anyway, loved your story, but, I like to comment that the other parts of this story I can't understand. Because your explainations about the story is kind of unclear. But love yoyr story. You'll be a great writer someday. But, as I said, you can improve by making your story plot clearer. I hope ur not mad for me saying that. But that's my opinion. hope u r not mad. Love your story, really, the greatest ever!
Fredryck 2007-01-03 ch 1,	abuseHehe, nice work here. You did a nice job with all the AU's, while the fifth story was interesting. Maybe, probably that isn't going to be canon, but who knows... Write more! :D
Astarael00 2007-01-01 ch 1,	abuseSomehow you kept both (three? but no one likes Ran; it's two) of them in character even though you went through six different AUs. Very nice. I like them all and can't really choose a favorite; almost I wish they were canon. But of course they'd conflict. I suppose it's just because I want the main character of the story to be Shiho. Hm. Oh, well. The best part is, hands down, the writing style. Short and choppy and long and flowing and in between. Reminds me of mine if I want to be conceited; reminds me of what I want mine to be, if I don't. But hey, you've got me typing stupid stuff. Good sign?
Claude le noctambule 2007-01-01 ch 1,	abuseWell, what could be better than a well done AU?Six well done AU at once!X3 It was interessing to see how Akemi deals with Shiho's fate and how would Shiho act if she were in her sister's shoes. I would have prefer if the story have not ended before Conan found the one he had not saved but well, the end was fine nonetheless. The second one was heartbreaking but it was just perfect. I've a weak spot for the fic which portrayed Shiho like someone who was not only a victim but a criminal in the same time, so it was a pleasure to see a story about our poor neglect Sherry. And you've made a good job, I could see her acting like that if she was playing in the same area than Gin. I loved how human she was despite the sad fate the org had put on her shoulder. Defintly one of my favorite in the six.^^ In the third one, you had succed to switching Ran and Shiho's place without made a false Shinichi/Ran fic with a clone of Ran named Shiho. And it was fun to see Haibara playing the twenty century Watson in her own manner.XD The fourth one was my favorite. I loved the way you had portrayed the Miyano family... And it was a wonderful surprise to see than, despite what it seemed, even in this timeline, the Miyano could not escape to the org. Yes, it was sad but beautifully executed(If I could say that in this context!). The five one was sweet and interessing. Until the end, I was waiting Haibara's awakening...And did I need to said than I was glad she seemed definitly trapped in her dream?^__^ The last one was short but I could see this scene happening. I loved the way you had showed the internal struggle in Haibara's mind, how facing her fate was not an easy thing to do and how she break her own doubt. Well, I loved Shiho in this six lifes you had gaves to her, and I hope this fic would not be the last one you wrotte about our favorite little chimist. ;) Add to fav.^__^
Ewz 2007-01-01 ch 1, anon.	abuseAwesome, just awesome. I absolutely love your portrayal of Ai, OOC or not.
Fyliwion 2007-01-01 ch 1,	abuseThat was cool ^^ I like the ideas behind them... they were all excellent ^^ great job!

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