lovie!

i love it so much

good job...

of course there could be more drama...

but alot of peps know i am a drama queen so it doesn't realy need drama

Very cool! TAKARI 4EVER!

sweet.and so very touching.

Wow...that was cute! Aw... *hugs myself*

Nice! how did Takeru know that Hikari said that no guy deserved her if he wasn't in that school yet? Anyways, it was really good! Takari4ever!

Wonderful story. In a few places I spotted some run on sentences that could use a little revising, but other than that the story was well written. You show a lot of talent. I enjoyed reading your story and I hope to see more Takari out of you soon. You did a very good job for this being your first fluffy story. Lacey

nice TAKARI 4-EVER

As you said TRULY FLUFFY FIC.

But I liked it a lot.

And I liked the way you wrote it aswell. I didn't even try to figure out who it was until I got to the part where she says: "Oh Takeru".

Congratulations! )

SO CUTE! :-)

One of the better one's I've seen in a while.

Awwwwwwww! :)

Aww! All nice and fluffly. *smiles warmly*