Hinata: Stare at that puddle, and you'll have your answer.
Naruto: WTF? *Stares long and hard...*

THE NEXT DAY...

Naruto: *Still standing there* I still don't get it!

XD I love how you described Naruto's heartache, and Hinata's embarrassment. Keep up the good work! ^-^

You know, your fanfictions look more like an encyclopaedia. An encyclopaedia about people, different situations and relationships. You really present the characters in a new light, one that I really like.

What a great story. I find that reading your one-shots really gives some great insight into the characters you portray and some times one chapter really is enough. Now if only Kishimoto has something like this planned... we can only hope. Keep up the great writing. I look forward to it!

I really like this, it is so cute!

I must say I have never seen a fic like this before. I am really amazed by your wrighting Dave-d.

EXCELLENT STORY!! And no rebounds at all!! It still didn't explain why Sakura broke up with him but it's all good. In the end, this story is excellent. Nice job, dave-d. 5 of out 5.

Absolutely wonderful story! Well written and very much in touch with reality. I'm a NaruHina fan but I can see a lot of people pushing NaruSaku. If ever NaruSaku does happen, I think it will be similar to what you have written. It's something that happens on a whim and not really meant to last. While Sakura has begun to admire Naruto, I don't think she cares about him. And Naruto's crush on Sakura is quite shallow IMHO. Hinata's crush and admiration on Naruto has driven her to become a stronger person which is why I approve of NaruHina. NaruSaku doesn't feel like it has some kind of individual growth.

I also loved the way you handled the how to get over a heartache. You've stated it bluntly but its true. There is no easy way to get over a breakup but other than the hope that your next relationship will be better. I completely agree on the stuff that you have said...even creating a bonfire out of your ex's pictures!

I hope you can write a sequel to this. Perhaps a realistic approach on how NaruHina can actually happen! Keep up the great work! I have added your story to my favorites!

A very well written story, it would be a shame if you've now stopped sharing your writing talent! All our fingers are crossed hoping for another story!

Nice! Had a good time reading it (and thinking of my own break-ups and whatnot). A bit OOC for Naruto, but hey, something like Sakura breaking up with him would tear him apart... Nice job.

I already read this story the day it came out but did not left a review, expecting you to write some more... Well it's been months now since the last one! I sure hope you post something new again. You really are talented!

Awesome fic D! I felt like I was the one who got dumped! I hope that you make a sequel, I wanna know why the hell Sakura dumped Naruto!

Hn. You're an excellent writer, so you know (although I'm sure you've heard that before)

I honestly enjoy the stuff you write, and would like to see more from you in the future.

Yo.
Ah. Nothing like a good NaruHina story, especially one which leaves the reader hanging like that.

It's a nice step away from the typical Naruto 'happy-go-lucky' style at the beginning, and you really capture Naruto's obliviousness and non-geniusness in this story.

I agree with the others, you should put an extra chapter in, about Naruto going through the 'schedule' thing Ayame told him to follow for getting over the breakup, then have Naruto's first date with Hinata.

This one deserves my official seal of approval. It lives up to your high standards as a writer, and showcases a side of Naruto most people never get to see.

Be seeing you.

By the way, I'd like to know why it seems you never list your completed fics, like 'fox hunt', as completed. It's irritating when I get to the end, wait a month for another chapter, then realize there won't be another.

I agree with chibi neko-dono...long, but excellent.

wow..that was really good...kinda long..but really good!