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kalinnnnn 2008-06-02 ch 1,	abuseYou know, your fanfictions look more like an encyclopaedia. An encyclopaedia about people, different situations and relationships. You really present the characters in a new light, one that I really like.
EtoileEyes 2008-03-03 ch 1,	abuseWhat a great story. I find that reading your one-shots really gives some great insight into the characters you portray and some times one chapter really is enough. Now if only Kishimoto has something like this planned... we can only hope. Keep up the great writing. I look forward to it!
An-Autheress-Unknown 2008-02-10 ch 1,	abuseI really like this, it is so cute!
spiderninja16 2007-11-29 ch 1,	abuseI must say I have never seen a fic like this before. I am really amazed by your wrighting Dave-d.
Kuro no Samurai 2007-09-05 ch 1,	abuseEXCELLENT STORY!! And no rebounds at all!! It still didn't explain why Sakura broke up with him but it's all good. In the end, this story is excellent. Nice job, dave-d. 5 of out 5.
mikoto lee 2007-08-28 ch 1,	abuseAbsolutely wonderful story! Well written and very much in touch with reality. I'm a NaruHina fan but I can see a lot of people pushing NaruSaku. If ever NaruSaku does happen, I think it will be similar to what you have written. It's something that happens on a whim and not really meant to last. While Sakura has begun to admire Naruto, I don't think she cares about him. And Naruto's crush on Sakura is quite shallow IMHO. Hinata's crush and admiration on Naruto has driven her to become a stronger person which is why I approve of NaruHina. NaruSaku doesn't feel like it has some kind of individual growth. I also loved the way you handled the how to get over a heartache. You've stated it bluntly but its true. There is no easy way to get over a breakup but other than the hope that your next relationship will be better. I completely agree on the stuff that you have said...even creating a bonfire out of your ex's pictures! I hope you can write a sequel to this. Perhaps a realistic approach on how NaruHina can actually happen! Keep up the great work! I have added your story to my favorites!
The Sound of Silence 2007-08-23 ch 1, anon.	abuseA very well written story, it would be a shame if you've now stopped sharing your writing talent! All our fingers are crossed hoping for another story!
Tab Jotbins 2007-06-30 ch 1,	abuseNice! Had a good time reading it (and thinking of my own break-ups and whatnot). A bit OOC for Naruto, but hey, something like Sakura breaking up with him would tear him apart... Nice job.
lukeluke 2007-05-31 ch 1,	abuseI already read this story the day it came out but did not left a review, expecting you to write some more... Well it's been months now since the last one! I sure hope you post something new again. You really are talented!
Clark Cradic 2007-05-04 ch 1, anon.	abuseAwesome fic D! I felt like I was the one who got dumped! I hope that you make a sequel, I wanna know why the hell Sakura dumped Naruto!
echolock 2007-04-30 ch 1,	abuseHn. You're an excellent writer, so you know (although I'm sure you've heard that before) I honestly enjoy the stuff you write, and would like to see more from you in the future.
Captain-Ronney 2007-04-09 ch 1, anon.	abuseYo. Ah. Nothing like a good NaruHina story, especially one which leaves the reader hanging like that. It's a nice step away from the typical Naruto 'happy-go-lucky' style at the beginning, and you really capture Naruto's obliviousness and non-geniusness in this story. I agree with the others, you should put an extra chapter in, about Naruto going through the 'schedule' thing Ayame told him to follow for getting over the breakup, then have Naruto's first date with Hinata. This one deserves my official seal of approval. It lives up to your high standards as a writer, and showcases a side of Naruto most people never get to see. Be seeing you. By the way, I'd like to know why it seems you never list your completed fics, like 'fox hunt', as completed. It's irritating when I get to the end, wait a month for another chapter, then realize there won't be another.
city with no people 2007-03-03 ch 1,	abuseI agree with chibi neko-dono...long, but excellent.
chibi neko-dono 2007-02-07 ch 1,	abusewow..that was really good...kinda long..but really good!
Ikasury 2007-01-28 ch 1,	abusene, D-kun, ^.^ i always like your shorts, always alot to them and are good inspiration when someone needs them... hehe i was thinking along similar lines about naruto going with sakura then getting dumped, i've been tryong to finish my little (now HUGE) song-fic about it, course i've got alot of my own ideas, but this just made me giggle and got my mind to steamroller that writer's block, well arigatou D-kun, i've read various shorts from you and this certainly didn't disappoint... i'll check out whatcha' got next, ne? till then salute-waves Sayonara!!

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