wow! i still say all men are jerks. except for a select few. really really good

Hey!

I wanted to thank you for reviewing my story and tell you that I will be taking it down to tweak it. I hope to have the updated chapters up within two weeks, but i'm sure you know that life doesnt' always go as planned.

Thank you again for your support!

-_- He cheated on her. Sorry, but I just can't get over that fact. And he didn't even feel all that bad about it. -_- If he can cheat on her once, what will stop him from cheating on her, or any other woman a second time? I really love your writing style, but I just can't stand cheaters, especially ones that don't seem to feel guilty about it. Well, I suppose he did, but only slightly..but it seems Serena was the one most affected by their seperation. Darien made no mention that he thought of her at all, only when he saw her again after 5 years did he think about her (like, for example, when he noticed her hair was silky..but I suppose that doesn't count since that's superficial, he did notice her personality but I can't remember). When you write in Darien's point of view, he just seems very cold and unemotional, but maybe that's just me.

Anyway, I'm sure I would love your story normally, but just not this idea! xD Hehe, anyway, Darien is still smexyy haha ;)

OMG i absolutely loved this story!
the whole plot really hooked me and i think you are one of the greatest FF authors!!
keep up the good work

wow that was amazing. i can't believe that i didn't review it. that was awesome! i loved it so much, you did such a great job with this story and i'm hoping that you'll make a one shot story to go along with this? please? [= awesome as always!

ur story was a good story and kinda funny also.

I loved the story only I hate the fact that no matter what kind of story it is that they always have to end it really sucks but you know thats what sequels and seires are for only they end eventually to dang it( Starts trying to figure out how to make publishers continue or see if they will let her continue ) Oh and like I said there are always Sequels ( hint hint )

Wow...that was such a massive twist...so all that time they were really acting? They sure had me fooled...and that new story of yours sounds interesting...keep on writing!! :D

Aw...though he still loves Jolene...

thanks for updating and write this final chapter. I really love it.
Thanks

Your story is just plain awesome. There's no better way to put it. Great work.
I got your email...THANKS! I totally apprecite your support and in return I promise to read and review as many of your stories as I can. Keep it up!! ; )

Diamond and Jolene were actually plotting to get Darien and Serena together again? Pretty clever! I loved the ending~ Maybe there should be a spin-off of this or something. Are Darien and Serena ever going to have a child together? (You know because she miscarried last time)

Anyways, great story run!:)

i loved this last chapter! aww, they're back together again! yay! but that WAS a huge twist at the end...i kind of thought that 'david' would be 'diamond', but i wasn't too sure until you added jolene in there. wow... nice ending though! and i like the idea for the new story!

Great ending! It didn´t happen so much in it but it was still great. I hope that your next story is as good as your other stories and I hope that u will post your other stories when u have correct the problems!

That was a GREAT ending. totally unexpected and it was really sad to when JO and diamand died, so im glad they lived.

I really like the idea for your next story. so update that soon.;)