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| Dybdahl 2008-07-04 ch 4, | abuseIn case you update this fab story, I'll put it on alert. |
| Sheilaele 2008-06-28 ch 4, | abusei loved the idea and it's really well written! You just HAVE to finish this! Love it! -Chargin |
| Connie 2008-06-06 ch 4, anon. | abuseNice. I'd enjoy reading more. You did have an odd phrase or two here and there, but overall readable and not too distracting. I like that Danny is as place-bound/obsessed as any other ghost. I haven't read many stories that go into any such nature, so it's refreshing and gives a cool original spin. All the ghost talk did, really. I'm very interested in seeing if this is the same Earth or perhaps a different one that's gotten crossed with the Phantom-verse. Or, in other words, if Danny really *could* just walk home or if he'll need the gate. (Though with what Daniel mentioned, it sounds like Danny F's world... maybe?) So, in summary, please come back and finish! |
| Library Drone SAR 2008-05-21 ch 4, | abusewonderful. I'm gonna put this in my C2. I've never seen this cross before. And it's well written. THATS hard to find to. I can't wait for more updates. |
| hoheehum 2008-05-08 ch 1, | abuseHow the... how DID I never notice that? I dunno. I guess to me Stargate would always overlap with my Animorph days, long away and far ago. All worm-like mind-controlling aliens bent on taking over Earth are the same to me. I guess I just never happened to be thinking about DP and SG at the same time, so it never clicked. Anyway, lots of fun! I do like the symmetry, there, at the end. Next chapter! |
| Amazing Bluie 2008-04-15 ch 4, | abusePlease update! This is a very enjoyable story! |
| Ceirwy 2008-03-22 ch 3, | abuseBEST CROSSOVER EVER. I am truly intrigued. |
| Jynxpixie 2008-03-09 ch 4, | abuseI'm really warming up to this story. XD It's written really well, nice job! What is Ellen's username? o3o |
| KyuukiTheAnimeFreak 2008-03-09 ch 4, | abuseUPDATE PLEASE! |
| Queen Haydee River 2008-01-09 ch 4, | abuseNice, please update. |
| shootingstar135 2007-12-16 ch 4, | abuseOMG i love the plot, and if you don't update then i will have to keep annoying you until you do, i'm not sure how but i will find a way. |
| chalicity 2007-10-29 ch 4, anon. | abusew00t! i haven't read any of your goodies in forever - years!? - when i was a detective conan fanatic. only lately i watched all of the danny phantom eppies (i agree - phantom planet made me very unhappy. the last few eppies made me rather cross and felt rather crappily done, imo) and turned my fanaticism to THAT and i was so excited to come across a DP story by YOU! ^^ i never watched stargate really, but i really like this story a lot (it's well written and intriguing!) and hope you update soon! :D |
| Isis the Sphinx 2007-10-18 ch 4, | abuseCan I see more of this? Please? I loved this. Was absolutely hilarious, and the connection makes sense. Keep writing! |
| Najrala 2007-10-06 ch 4, anon. | abuseYou updated! =D Great chapter! Can't wait until they find Fenton XDD |
| infraredphaeton 2007-10-06 ch 4, | abusethis is such a cool idea. Very well executed, you've got Danny in character, Jack's perfect, and Sam is exactly how she should be in the whole "OMG!!GHOST!...wtf?" I think Daniel would ask more questions, but he's still in character. I like the idea of Danny being a place bound ghost, and you wrote the scene with the box ghost surprisingly well, a lot of authors just sort of ignore him, or throw him in for kicks, so it's more like, "BEWARE!" *THERMOS* "well. that was fun." All in all, really good story!@ |