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Dybdahl
2008-07-04
ch 4,
abuseIn case you update this fab story, I'll put it on alert.
Sheilaele
2008-06-28
ch 4,
abusei loved the idea and it's really well written!

You just HAVE to finish this!

Love it!

-Chargin
Connie
2008-06-06
ch 4, anon.
abuseNice. I'd enjoy reading more.

You did have an odd phrase or two here and there, but overall readable and not too distracting.

I like that Danny is as place-bound/obsessed as any other ghost. I haven't read many stories that go into any such nature, so it's refreshing and gives a cool original spin. All the ghost talk did, really.

I'm very interested in seeing if this is the same Earth or perhaps a different one that's gotten crossed with the Phantom-verse. Or, in other words, if Danny really *could* just walk home or if he'll need the gate. (Though with what Daniel mentioned, it sounds like Danny F's world... maybe?)

So, in summary, please come back and finish!
Library Drone SAR
2008-05-21
ch 4,
abusewonderful. I'm gonna put this in my C2. I've never seen this cross before. And it's well written. THATS hard to find to. I can't wait for more updates.
hoheehum
2008-05-08
ch 1,
abuseHow the... how DID I never notice that? I dunno. I guess to me Stargate would always overlap with my Animorph days, long away and far ago. All worm-like mind-controlling aliens bent on taking over Earth are the same to me. I guess I just never happened to be thinking about DP and SG at the same time, so it never clicked.
Anyway, lots of fun! I do like the symmetry, there, at the end.
Next chapter!
Amazing Bluie
2008-04-15
ch 4,
abusePlease update! This is a very enjoyable story!
Ceirwy
2008-03-22
ch 3,
abuseBEST CROSSOVER EVER. I am truly intrigued.
Jynxpixie
2008-03-09
ch 4,
abuseI'm really warming up to this story. XD It's written really well, nice job!
What is Ellen's username? o3o
KyuukiTheAnimeFreak
2008-03-09
ch 4,
abuseUPDATE PLEASE!
Queen Haydee River
2008-01-09
ch 4,
abuseNice, please update.
shootingstar135
2007-12-16
ch 4,
abuseOMG i love the plot, and if you don't update then i will have to keep annoying you until you do, i'm not sure how but i will find a way.
chalicity
2007-10-29
ch 4, anon.
abusew00t! i haven't read any of your goodies in forever - years!? - when i was a detective conan fanatic. only lately i watched all of the danny phantom eppies (i agree - phantom planet made me very unhappy. the last few eppies made me rather cross and felt rather crappily done, imo) and turned my fanaticism to THAT and i was so excited to come across a DP story by YOU! ^^

i never watched stargate really, but i really like this story a lot (it's well written and intriguing!) and hope you update soon! :D
Isis the Sphinx
2007-10-18
ch 4,
abuseCan I see more of this? Please? I loved this. Was absolutely hilarious, and the connection makes sense. Keep writing!
Najrala
2007-10-06
ch 4, anon.
abuseYou updated! =D
Great chapter! Can't wait until they find Fenton XDD
infraredphaeton
2007-10-06
ch 4,
abusethis is such a cool idea.
Very well executed, you've got Danny in character, Jack's perfect, and Sam is exactly how she should be in the whole "OMG!!GHOST!...wtf?" I think Daniel would ask more questions, but he's still in character.
I like the idea of Danny being a place bound ghost, and you wrote the scene with the box ghost surprisingly well, a lot of authors just sort of ignore him, or throw him in for kicks, so it's more like, "BEWARE!"
*THERMOS*
"well. that was fun."
All in all, really good story!@
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