I hate to break it to you, but your character already sounds like a Mary Sue. Um, let's see, shall we?
Hint of angsty past
Robin falling in love at first sight
Beast Boy swooning over her
Multiple descriptions of her hair
Introduction of being chased by some baddies

Work on it. Seriously.

name says all.

i loved the intro, the plot line, the added characters, and how well you described everything with out makeing sound like rambling

you have great talent my firend
hope to read more soon ^_^

Please update soon!

cools!! i like the story so far, please continue!!

okay frickin sweet that was really good for the first try
do make more of the fan of fiction(talkin like starfire here) plz