A great story. I liked the part where Tummnus was telling the story about the evil faun.

oh that is so cute. u earned a spot on my favs. i think it would be kool if u did a chapter with her telling the boys. but thats jsut me.

I would bawl if I didn't know they'd actually go back to Narnia is the next book... I can't believe I just said that. damn fiction! great story, though, awesome writing:) I love the description you used.