It was a good story and i really enjoyed it

I don't really know what i felt it was a little like curiosity.

Princess Ducky

it's so angsty, but i guess that's the point. he was going to commit suicide, wasn't he?

A snapshot from the world of darkness that is Snape's mind. It's great to come across such writing.

Not bad. To be honest, its maybe a bit indecisive. The idea is good, but the style is in between sketchy and descriptive: I think that for this to be outstanding, you should pick one of the two extremes and really work in one direction. Other than that its quite pleasant to read. Keep on writing.
-Isa