Okay, after this chapter, I simply could not keep reading. As much as I adore the notion of the Everworlders meeting the Animorphs, this is ridiculous. You're selling the Everworlders short, and pretty severely; these are people who lived their day-to-day lives not so much living as surviving - you're telling me that you think they're unable to outwit or outplan a group of younger kids, and on their turf, no less?

The Animorphs had it rough, yes, but they had homes to go to, times to relax. The Everworlders were constantly under siege - you could even feel an undercurrent of paranoia in most books; these are teenagers accustomed to scraping by with their resourcefulness, which, mind you, they've got plenty of. Not to mention that your Christopher is too much of an bastard, not enough of a coward. Christopher is moody and sarcastic, but he isn't stupid. He wouldn't leave the safety of a group for such quibbling reasons.

Pit the Animorphs against the Everworlders, and I'd say they're pretty evenly matched, especially with Merlin on hand. Sure, the Animorphs have survived some pretty intense situations with various alien species, but the Everworlders have faced and outwitted gods, goddesses, and a plethora of other deities and alien beings with human abilities alone (and Galahad's sword, "Excalibur", etc, which they have by now). With Merlin, I'd even go so far as to say that I'd bet on the Everworlders.

Skimming the ninth chapter, do you think that David is going to take kindly to the "voting" business? Or any of the Everworlders? They're a pretty discordant group that only agrees to do things after each has reasoned it out; I highly doubt that they'd go for voting with a group that has larger numbers and just arrived in Everworld - not even Jalil, who'd probably reason that since they knew more, they should lead.

And for the record, there aren't usually trenches under paths, so I don't see how David's assumption about the river was wrong. Solid ground can't be washed away, and floods are not fast moving after the fact. What, WTE?

Furthermore, by the time Cassie attacked David in chapter four, he'd already been acquainted with morphing, so why would he let up his defenses? He's a battle-scarred, hands-on fighting person who nearly daily engages in close combat with men trained for war, and has seen more than his share of bizarreness, blood, and death in Everworld. Realistically, he'd have sliced her in two before she could even reach him - he's cold and ruthless, moreso than Jake. It's why he stayed in Everworld.

And the grievances continue.

I know this is in the Animorphs section, and I'd expected bias, but not to this degree.

And it's a shame, because the concept has promise and the first three chapters were a treat to read.

Oh gosh. That was funny! haha! It was really Marcoish, the way you wrote it and everything..*Lonna snickers quietly as she finishes*...And that is so cool! Now he has a *god* morph! Oh, that would be such a totally awesome morph to have.
This is, by far, the *best* Animorphs/Everworld crossover I have *ever* read. Awesome job! :)

Awesome! Mother Sky and Father Deep? I didn't really think about them being actual gods before--just, well, the sky and that weird between-thing separating the Hork-Bajir from the Arn. anyway, I like this. :)

LOL. Mate? hehehe. And...it doesn't seem like something Ax would do, but that's okay. Other than that, everyone of the Animorphs sounds pretty IC. I'd say the same about the Everworld characters but I haven't read all the books so I can't say for sure. LOL. Anyway, I like it. Oh, and one more thing...Mr. I-don't-mess-around-with-the-affairs-of-lesser-beings's name is spelled 'Ellimist', not 'ellemest'. Just thought I'd point that out. :)

Wow. Wow, Cassie...Just wow. What'll this do to the two groups though? I mean--now they won't trust each other any more 'cause of the whole fight and all?

to the author's note: Yeah, I've noticed that too. It annoyed me to no end, which is partly why this story is so cool! Any other Animorph/Everworld crossovers I've read weren't exactly very good...And I really like how this one is going so far!
Do they ever say stuff like "Everworld to April" in the books? I haven't gotten my hands on all of them yet, so i'm not sure. LOL. so...I like this, and I'm off to read chapter two!
Lon

Awesome!

:P Nice chapter. I wonder when Marco will use that Zeus morph. I haven't read Everworld, but your story is good enough without having to read it. Good job!

Thank Deep there's no Yeerks.

Christopher reminds me of David. You know, rat boy? That David. Although, this David kinda reminds me of him too. Anyway, update!

Plenty of good things, I'm sure.

Never read Everworld, but pan to correct that. This stuff is the bomb!
If you're still looking for a beta, I'll volunteer. I can't pick out story or character errors, but I am vicious about spelling and grammar.

sorry if this make me sound bitchy but it IS Fenris.
I had a norse mythologi addiction.

and Im norwiegian, so I should know

You've got my attention, and I'm even convinced that your crossover-excuse is within the realm of the plausible. It's not perfect, but I like it.

the names are wrong... its Balder not Baldur, Loke not Loki
AND THE WOLFS NAME IS FENRIS, FENRISFENRISFENRISFENRISFENRIS.
you got it?

Nice story any way.
*going of to the next chapter.