wow!...a brillant and entertaing peice of work...i totally enjoyed reading it immensly...it was just love!..espcially to see a drunk kakashi to iruka hiding from kakashi and finally kakashi giving flowers to iruka...it was a wonderuflly written story...i love it!

Wow. That was incredible. Unlike most of what I have read. Definatley a great thing. I loved the "knowledge" part. Made me laugh silly. Thanks for writing it. I look forward to reading more of your writing.

Refreshingly well written piece of fiction. I loved the story from the beginning to the end. You developed the relationship between the main characters somehow very naturally. Good God, I like your work too much.

aww that is so sweet!

I just love these odd-ball couple. And the way you write about them, even makes them more endearing to me. I love your work. Gokurou!

Ohmygod I loved it...Nothing short of...blissful...

it should have been a hasty finish, but the last paragraph satisfied the plot conclusion. So... yay. a few spelling errors, such as 'subtle' but i liked it. to rephrase, Yay.

Wow, that was a really great story. I hope your others are just as great! ^.^ Don't worry, I don't mind your minor problems with English, and I bet you are a lot better now. If you are still looking for a beta (whether for the stories you have already finished or ones that you are still working on) I'd like to help.

very vute :)

That was a very, VERY good story. You need to work on the way you word things in English though, in some cases. :) Otherwise, GOOD JOB! *gives big thumbs-up!*

Pretty nice : )

hello. it's me again.
just incase you don't remember: i'm the one that reviewed 3 of your stories all on the same day.
anyway, i must say you have made yet another wonderful fan fiction. i loved the irony. it was cute and on the edge.
it wasn't as good as Bathhouse Revelations but it was still good.
hope you up-date BR soon ^^

Hey again!

Just a little review (even before having read your fic! Don't worry, I'll get to that soon... :P)
I'll be reading in on this one then, since it's the one you are planning on updating, but I'm still looking forward (very much so) to the other stories.

If I'm not being to bold, I'd like to offer my 'help' as beta-er... English is not my native language, but because I learned it via a lot of grammar rules, I believe I might actually be able to be of some kind of assistance. Plus I get to read your newest chapters before they come out!

Please don't take offence if I was too bold, and of course it's just an offer, not an order or an obligation. I realise you'll probably stick to your usual beta-er, but will you at least keep me in mind as a back-up?

Tia,
I'm off to do some reading now!

Love & X

Love it. It's so sweet! :)

this is really cute, and i absolutely love the ending :)
great job :D