Wonderful story! I really enjoyed it! Amazing ending!

i love it

real good.

i liked it.

like, lots.

i really like you.

lots!

yeah.

the end.

Great story. I love your style of writing.

Reminds me of that saying, the more things change the more they stay the same.

This is a simply beautiful wj fic. Smooth, bittersweet, sexy toward the end. Simply lovely. Bravo!

Certainly on the same level as your more recent works, so you are very consistent.

Happy 50th to you!

What a way to celebrate number 50! I loved it! You painted such a scene that I could see the color of the sand and the sky and Woody silhouetted as she approached her car. Very impressive, and I'm glad you pulled it off the old hard drive to share it with us. :)

I love this. I don't EVEN want to admit how many times I've already read it. What a great way to capture the slow fracture of Jordan's heart without her completely falling apart.

I loved it! Truely terrific!

DJ

That was nice. I'd kick around with something very simular to this but never got past a few notes on it. I'm glad...because you are the master. YOu captured the feeling.

Congrats on #50

Again.. you write a perfect "imperfect" couple, but acknowledge that both are too far under each other's skin to ever be free of each other.