Please, go on your story. This is great!

Hello. :) Yer ol' pal, The Bud.

Oh please continue, I want more...

It was good. Keep writing more.

WOW! Great first start there. Dramatic, emotional and gorgeously written. I loved the part with Storm and her loosing control. I'm very much lookin' forward to the next chapter.. this is exciting! Bravo.