From what I can tell, the jutsu means "Spatial Axis Entrance, Admission,Imprisonment" Or something of the sort, right?

Very interesting. Naruto remindes me of the malcavions from "Vampire the Mascurade". hope you decide to pick this up again one day.

not really enough to tell you what i think, the next chapter is most important in telling this stories plot and you havent done anything. didnt even translate your jutsu. update at least once more before asking for peoples opinions.

that was brill keep it up hury up and update anyways good work

what this mean/standfore Kuukanjiku Nyuusho no Jutsudoes? and this is a real eye catching story.

can you add what that jutsu the hokage uses at the end pleas and it was ok

it is something new, it is well writen but it is not updated ...
so update it, the next chapter is there , somewhere in your brain

what's going on?? what were the jutsus that the hokage and anbu used?

I love this

you should really update.

Wow... this is creepily great. The beginning was quite angsty and odd, then it just got plain sick with that girl, and it got disgusting with the bodies of how insane he became... which for some reason I like. The Hokage thing was pretty much what should be done instead of the Hokage not listening to the council in most fanfics. Very well written as well.

BTW: Finish this, it's been 8 months since you posted it.

Great story please update when you get the time 9/10.

hehe, should have made it where he leaves with the anbu while hugging head-chan

I like how its goin, but whats the last jutsu mean? lol I wish i could read Japanese.. but i cant lmao, so ya... anyways keep it up! :D

wow! This one kinda sneaks up on you. It's well written and has a really surreal quality to it, that goes well with Naruto's view of the world as a child. It's definitely one of the most graphically violent fics I've read, so...congratulations?

I'm a bit confused but it has the potential to be a good story.