OMg i love this story! It was one of the best romance/seducing/killing whatever stories I've read! I LOVED IT! lol

keep it up!

nice! I don't like this Richard character... but i have a feeling Rouge is going to have some seducing to do! Great work Ane! Keep it up!

Im really liking this story. its dark and funky, but is all the cussin really neccessary?

Alert me when the nextchapter is out, im sure ill be the first to know

-JOCOOL 8)

This story is very you,

I guess ive read the notoriouse "CHPTER THREE" I have to say it was handled well, as in you didnt try to make it a half baked lemon,great job !

This is getting interesting, especially taking into consideration what i know about the overall plot that hasnt been formally revealed yet. By the way, Kama Sutra is not Karma Sutra and its capitolized because its the name of a book ((my perverse English teacher talked about that one day ;)) And as if i didnt know, what is it with the men in this story and being shirtless? :-)

"A scrub is a guy who thinks he's fine. hes also known as a buster. Always thinkin' 'bout what he wants and just sits on his book ass..." ((Green Tea warehouse rave o.0?))

If I have only one comment its that the names are slighty unoriginal, but that ok :)

DAMN SEXY! I LOOOOVE THAT LINE! ::calms down:: more! more! i like!

i like it so far! havent read the second chapter yet, but i'm sure it only gets better! Your discriptions of the characters are wonderful, and you're really working on all the good plot information. My bee sting hurts. bee's should go to hell.

I really liked that story. I hope you'll have some more of it out. It's really interesting and the characters are well thought up. It's a great story.

*.* I, / ,loved it. Better than I had even expected..How many chapters do you plan upon writing? I'd like to role play this. Mmmuy-muy-muy-muy! This hotel is creepy...I think one of the clerks was staring at me. Uhm..I havn't gotten mugged yet, but I almost mugged someone x.x; On accident, of course. Like I said, I'd LOVE to role play this...and I'm going to draw random moments in the story, kay? Kay. Sayo.