Why is it rated Mature when it doesn't describe what happens? You could easily bump the rating down to T. Anyway, I liked how Sirius used the spell.

Hey, good work! Keep it up, my litle hippo!
Eric

ah! another cute story! I really do like this and the other one, i still think remus n tonks r a cute couple but i reckon sirius n remus r too! They'd have made a cute couple if Sirius hadn't died n remus hadn't fallen for Tonks, i the books! lol! O well!

short, but not bad. Sirius is such a bad boy. : P

I could just picture Sirius doing something like that to get Remus into bed! :D

Adorable! I love it! Poor little Remus always so serious. Great fic. Good luck!


-ANimal

Yes, I did enjoy it. Nice and short, funny and endearing. And totally canon-compliant, with the characters as written by JKR.
Sirius: easily bored (canon)
Sirius: clever wizard who can do magic without bothering to study much (canon)
Remus: gay as a rainbow flag (well if it isn't canon it ought to be)
Nice work. Compulsory small niggle: first paragraph, third sentence, needs a comma after "parchment".