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Baliansword
2007-01-24
ch 1,
abuseI liked it. (Even though you should have found some 30 Seconds to Mars lyrics. Just kidding.)

The only problem that I had with it was that I would have wanted more from you, as far as writing goes. The lyrics are nice, but it seems to appear as if there are more lyrics than your individual writing. Just an idea to keep.

Hope to see more of your work though!

~Baliansword
rejazzz
2007-01-05
ch 1,
abuseyou know i love it! Keep em comin!
Smitty
2007-01-03
ch 1, anon.
abuseGreat story,very deep,I like it. Keep up the good work! :D

I thought the Three Days Grace lyrics were a very nice touch,accented the story well :)

Keep writing!
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