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IDetestTragedy
2009-11-09 . chapter 1
“If it’s for you, it’s never a waste. As long as you’re happy, I know I will be too.” Ooh, so touching.
kitoyisme
2008-05-26 . chapter 1
wonderful story... :D hehehe... :D i love it very much... ;D

more power!
-kitoyisme
Firey Chronicles
2007-12-10 . chapter 1
very sweet
Cheska
2007-10-17 . chapter 1
Pretty. It was very pretty. ^__^
speadee
2007-10-15 . chapter 1
Good story! You kept them in character. I like the sunrise: it was beautiful. I also like how you included the picture of the regulars from Episode 73. The part about the cars was funny too.

I was confused near the beginning. Did Fuji ask Echizen to meet him at the bridge? If not, why did Echien even go out if he wasn't going to school? It sounded as if he was heading for school, then stopped when he met Fuji.
kitsune16487
2007-07-10 . chapter 1
THATS SWEET...IN A WAY... I WAS HOPING FOR SOME LEMONADE-FLAVOURED PIC THOUGH...
Yue
2007-06-04 . chapter 1
There... there... another great fic by you. I can't describe it in words... wonderful and great are not enough anymore for your fics... All i can say... keep up your good work... keep up for your best!
I like how wonderful Fuji and Ryoma's relationship is.

~Yue~
Mrs Hatake Itachi
2007-04-07 . chapter 1
Nice!
Klappy
2007-03-16 . chapter 1
Aw...

Cute. Really cute. I loved it. ^^ Although I've noticed not a single reason for this to be Rated-T (I think K+ would already be appropriate)...or is there? Ah...but just ignore that. Whatever rating it belongs to, I still loved it.

God bless.
yamatoforever
2007-01-14 . chapter 1
Ah, that's really sweet. I mean it. To watch the first sunrise with your beloved. And Fuji's wish is really sweet. Also what Ryoma thought about Fuji was his happiness. ^_^
Ai-Kusabana
2007-01-05 . chapter 1
Hi there! So cute! Aw... Their wishes are very sincere! Just like Fuji to be happy if the people he cares and loves is happy! ^_^ Hope you'll make another one!
Trumpet-Geek
2007-01-04 . chapter 1
I like this fic, it's very cute! I'm a huge Fuji Ryoma fan. I can totally see them together and arguing over who gets the car and stuff. Good job!
NBKitty
2007-01-02 . chapter 1
Loved it. Very cute.
M. Bautista
2007-01-02 . chapter 1
oh kawaii! im usually not an advocate of syuxryo, but i decided to take a chance on this one and it was so good. Theres really not much i can critique on. There were times when things were unclear, but were soon cleared up. I noticed that that style of introduction popped up here alot and its not bad, but if you do that, try to make it more mysterious so that we KNOW we're not supposed to know instead of us just being confused. Other than that, this was a very good story, well formatted, proper grammar and such, and you kept in character. this goes on my favorites...
Bonnie Mizuhara
2007-01-02 . chapter 1
AW That was so cute! No really, that was the best new years Thrill paair fic I've read! They're just so kawaii together! Aw...
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