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nyakattia
2007-02-06
ch 4,
abuseHey, I think you really have some potential here- but I was wondering if maybe the poems were meant to be written in a more traditional poem format- every clause separated by a new line- than this paragraph format you have going here. If so, don't forget to double space between lines. It will spread them out a bit more, but also make them easier to read as a poem.
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