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| Gear's Girl 2007-02-11 ch 11,  | abusethe ending was lacking, but overall it was a good story. |
| Print Dust 2007-02-11 ch 11, | abuseAwe the Warrick ending made me smile. :) Very cute and well done. The conversation in the last chapter is very well done. Easy to read and believable. I’m kind of sad to see this one end because the drama was great but I already know you have something else amazing in the works. ;) Mostly because I read it this morning. Thanks for sharing such and amazing story Pesi. |
| tory 2007-02-10 ch 11, anon. | abuseits over, no! i like this story! it made me happy and sad and excited and freaked out all at the same time! and i liked the ending it made me laugh, cept it seemed like something nick would say, not warrick... or greg... but greg was running down the hall... hehehehehehehe grissom smelled... ok, so great job! i liked this one probably the most! but that could be i just dont remember the other ones right now, but thats ok! i liked them all i know that much! great job, and keeps writting stories please, they're my entertainment when the show isn't on! ^.^ |
| necira 2007-02-10 ch 11, | abusegood ending to your story...looking forward to you writing more |
| xbexyboox 2007-02-10 ch 11, | abuseA great ending for a great fic! I've loved reading this! |
| Gear's Girl 2007-02-05 ch 10, | abuseoh wow...very intense... |
| tory 2007-02-04 ch 10, anon. | abusewhat!? one more chapter!? thats it!?!?!??!?!?! no! i have one issue with fanfictions- i want them to be real! so very badly! like i want to be able to go and find an episode, where this exact thing happens! exspecially this one- i love it so very much! you tis amazing- just so you know |
| xbexyboox 2007-02-04 ch 10, | abuseAnother great chapter! Can't wait to see how it ends! |
| Kess 2007-02-03 ch 10, | abusePlease don't kill her off! |
| necira 2007-02-02 ch 10, | abuseWow, I hope you'll post the last chapter soon...this story has been so good, I can't wait to see how it wraps up |
| Janne.G 2007-02-02 ch 10, | abuseOh my God Please continue soon Really wanna know what happens |
| Tory 2007-01-31 ch 9, anon. | abusewha!? no! thats too mean! i mean- how could you! thats like the meanest cliffhanger in like the hostory of the world! gasp! i cant wait till next chappie! |
| stareagle 2007-01-29 ch 9, | abuseWow the pace of this story is so fast- You did a great job maintaining the tension- but boy is the Mayor going to be ripped when he gets the bills for all the wrecked Tahoes! Well please don't kill off Sara- love the make up angst and sex! Thanks for keeping us on the edge through this- |
| Gear's Girl 2007-01-28 ch 9, | abusecliff hanger much? Great chap! |
| necira 2007-01-28 ch 9, | abusegood chapter...hopefully help will get to them in time |