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| hersheygal 2007-06-22 ch 25,  | abuseWow, I just love your insight! |
| hersheygal 2007-06-22 ch 24, | abusethat was great! |
| FebruarySong 2007-06-02 ch 25, | abuseWow, this was great. I love how you tied in the flashback to the story. And the line, "But she had touched him" just tugs at my heartstrings. Whoo hoo! |
| Got Scots? 2007-06-02 ch 24, anon. | abuseAw this is adorable! And it's a good point you make about Des and his not being social. It'll just make it even sadder when Charlie *does imitation of Charlie getting hit with a ping pong ball* dies. :( Very good chapter, and the dialouge sounds exactly like Des and Charlie! -Got Scots? |
| FebruarySong 2007-05-31 ch 24, | abuseAw, a warm fuzzy chapter. I needed that. Too funny with Charlie "dying" from a ping-pong. I heart Desmond. |
| falafel-fiction 2007-05-31 ch 24, | abuseAw! Such a cute Charlie & Des moment. This helps cheer me up after Chesmond ended in tragedy. I'm sorry to hear this fic is going on hiatus. I've been enjoying it. |
| hersheygal 2007-05-27 ch 23, | abuseI can't wait for more! |
| hersheygal 2007-05-27 ch 22, | abuseGreat job! |
| hersheygal 2007-05-27 ch 21, | abuseGreat chapter! |
| FebruarySong 2007-05-27 ch 23, | abuseAH! It's official: This story along with Drinking Buddies (or whatever the sequel is called) will be my sanity until January!! Thank you Skylar! |
| hersheygal 2007-05-26 ch 20, | abuseWow. Great chapter. I really sympathize with Desmond on this. Poor guy. Sorry I didn't review sooner! |
| FebruarySong 2007-05-22 ch 1, | abuseWow, I really love this fic. Went through and read the whole thing in one sitting. Des and Sayid are two of my favorite characters, it's interesting to see a more in-depth point of view from them. Coolies! |
| Got Scots? 2007-05-10 ch 21, anon. | abuseI would regret not asking Dessie to come too. :D Very well written chapter. I especially liked this bit: "As an interrogator, he'd grown accustomed to freezing his features before they could morph into a display of anger." That whole paragraph explained a lot about Sayid and his past even though you were still focusing on his actions. Very good! --Got Scots? |
| Ladywilde 2007-05-09 ch 1, | abuseOh wow, this is really well written. I love the dialouge and I love Sayid's and Desmonds conversation, so wonderful. I like what you are doing with this - I never noticed how very similar these two men are - esp. with the budding relationship between Desmond and Claire...lovely writing, I can't wait to read more. |
| Got Scots? 2007-04-27 ch 20, anon. | abuseNice! I love the tension between Desmond and Charlie. I am actually starting to like them as a couple (lol, sad but true). I can't wait to see the next few chapters that go with this episode. Keep writing! --Got Scots? |