Judging by your last update, you probably won't be continuing this story, but it's a real shame because despite the lack of any plot outside of their relationship, I'm loving this. It's a good story and well written (with a few spelling issues here and there, but nothing too distracting)

I love the character development and the way you've kept Bakura a badass even though he gets sentimental with Ryou. I'd be interested to see where this goes, if we see more of YY/Y or if Malik and Mariku get a bond.

I'd give it an 8.5 out of 10, and I tend to be harsh.

is this story dead because if so thats terribly sad.

This is a pretty cool story and I hope that you will continue with it. It took me a couple of days to get the last chapter, but each chapter was very enjoyable. Please update when you can and don't abandon this. Cheers

YOU WIN THE INTERNET.
Seriously, you just *win*. This fic is pure brilliance. It's... amazing. Characterizations of Ryou and Bakura are excellent. I wouldn't change a thing. This will be sure to go on my favs later when I sign in. Also, I think how you wrote Atemu and Yugi was pretty funny-- they constantly finished each other sentences. It's all the little things that make this fic great, such as the smiley face that Bakura drew that looked like it was grinning evilly. Or the comments he would write on his students' papers. Your characters stayed true to themselves throughout this, and that made it very enjoyable. I hope you're still writing; if you weren't, the writing world would be denied a very talented author.

great story! cant wait to see what happens next, hope you continue it someday...

whoa. u rock

Ah get a move on and write more. I need more, more. I'm damn right impatient and I like this story to much. I hope there will be a sequel or something if you think it's only two more chapters till the end. Any way update I need more :D

ugh! hurry up and update woman!

aw, you completley skipped over the lemon =P

you suck sometimes, haha

X3

this story is getting so good! you need to start updating it again!!

yay for reading things illegally and not being caught by government officials! =D

OMFG yay!

lmao, it was good but the wordy-ness of this chapter made it a bit more confusing then it should have been

i'm getting to the "reviewing takes too long and i could be using that time to read the next chapter" phase...

lmao! Bakura's starting to hear Ryou's thoughts! X3