There are so many directions that you can go with this story. It is of course up to you. I hope that you will continue to work on this story and others. Sometimes it helps to work on a completely different story for a little bit or read a book that is within the same genre. I can't wait to read more about Alexia and the characters of YH.

I like the flow of this story and hope to see more, are you gonna update anytime soon?

NWG

I am really enjoying this story. It is well written and the dialogue for each character is right on. I like that you are exploring Iolaus' character more. I hope that you will finish this story.

Ooh! Unresolved tension! I do hope that you will finish this so Iolaus and Alexia can clear the air. :D

You friend,
HiddenValor

hey, it's aimee from yhu :)

i like this one, hope you continue :)