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| Broken Gold 2007-12-05 ch 1, | abuseYay! Cheesey fluff! Don't worry it's great! My brother just ran out of my room screaming so I guess he was reading over my shoulder guaranteeing that his strange dislike for all things romantic in Danny Phantom hasn't fade. YAY! |
| DarkMignonette 2007-08-24 ch 1, | abuseAw, I don't think it was cheesy at all~! But yes..I did start giggling, and squeeing, but just from the cuteness of it. ^_^ I think you are a very good writer, and I especially liked the ending. |
| Cute in Purple 2007-08-16 ch 1, | abuseEven though I agree it was mushy and stuff I think it was cute and well nice but as I think of it,it really is kinda stupid and cheesy it sounded but still anything CAN happen in the game of love but I have never ever ever personally expericinced love to back that up. -Alex |
| AbsintheSpoons 2007-08-01 ch 1, | abuseCute! Although, yeah, the kiss was kind of... off. Most the story was all innocent and fluffy, and then you've got this hot, adult-oriented sort of make-out. Awkward. |
| mione16 2007-06-25 ch 1, anon. | abuseGreat story. Loved the idea and execution of the story. I did not think that the kissing scene was cheesy or bad I thought it was cute. I think you're very good at writing kissing scenes. Good Job! Give yourself a cookie and a pat on the back! |
| Authorgirl818 2007-06-23 ch 1, | abuseI liked it, it was cute because Sam wore something non-goth, you know? i'd always liked seeing (reading) about danny's expressions seeing Sam as non goth. i liked it a lot, good job! |
| reader 2007-05-18 ch 1, anon. | abusethe ending needs work but still good story |
| brightlily 2007-05-09 ch 1, | abuseyou're stuff is fantastic. = ] |
| rydensupporter 2007-05-04 ch 1, | abuseHey hey hey... Your kiss scenes are not bad! I started to smile when i read it. AWESOME STORY |
| Misa Alucard 2007-04-18 ch 1, | abusenice fic, I liked it, it's not so fluffy and the kiss scene was simply adorable |
| Josefine 2007-03-11 ch 1, | abuseNo, it was so cute! I didnt start giggling, I did how ever made me smile. Then again, I´m a big sucker for cheesy fics :P But I loved it and I don´t think it could have been better then it is! |
| Invader Johnny 2007-03-03 ch 1, | abuseBitchy Paulina, one of these days she's gonna get what's coming to her and we are ALL gonna enjoy when that day comes. Ah, another kiss scene, yes it was cheesy but I don't really care mostly because Danny and Sam end up together. Invader Johnny Signing Off. |
| InnerSakura14 2007-02-21 ch 1, | abuseI didn't start giggling but it was cute only the last line was cheesy. |
| Siamese2005 2007-01-23 ch 1, | abuseI thought the kiss scene was very cute! Good job! |
| TentensBestFriend 2007-01-22 ch 1, | abuseDude, why do you hate your stories?! They are totally awesome! I love this story, its so cute! And it doesnt matter if people giggle at kissing scenes. I always laugh & freak out when I'm writing or reading mine! You rock! |