 Zen Monk 2009-11-09 . chapter 14Good person, this story is both engaging and fabulous. I desire to see the future of where this is going before my cranium explodes with all sorts of possibilities lining up for me to guess.
So while I should say that please take whatever time you need to finish mulling over whatever it is you decide to take this story to, I IMPLORE you to not abandon this gem that I'm reading.
With love,
Zen. |
 hoheehum 2008-03-06 . chapter 1This looks like it's gonna be good.
Unfortunately, I don't have time to read any more this morning, as I have a plane to catch soon, and I may not have internet access after that- but I shall definitely set out to read the whole thing!
The only kinda-criticism I have is that it seems the characters' speech is a tad too formal. But that's it. Because your writing's great.
And may I just say that I love your name, Neocount? |
 invocations 2007-11-03 . chapter 14Man. It's pretty early in the morning here, but I just wanted to say that I'm hooked on this! It's very interesting to see the crew so long after the game and the world with all its changes seems so real. I hope the story gets updated...at some point, anyway. ^^ |
 Anonymous 2007-05-18 . chapter 1 Any chance you could transfer this from the Rufus/Tifa section? :D |
 Rehime 2007-05-13 . chapter 14Nice, Tifa springs back into action!
Nice work with this chapter, one of my favs (again). |
 Rehime 2007-05-02 . chapter 13Wow, I love your portrayal of Yuffie. Very sensual, but still her.
Good work. |
 moonjump05 2007-04-23 . chapter 12This is great, plenty of action and suspense. No grammar or spelling mistakes that stand out. Hah, even the love triangles are pulled off well. I like Rude/Tifa but not really Tifa/Cloud or Yuffie/Rufus or Yuffie/Reno, but you pull them off really well.
I want to see what happens from the Geostigma, and the Cloud-materia thing. |
 Demented Fairy 2007-04-22 . chapter 12This is utterly fantastic! I am in love with this story. The details, the interaction of characters, the plot, the twists, everything! Truly, I was shocked when I read about Tseng. I am used to reading stories where he is a good guy, so this one hell of a plot twist is a wonderfully refreshing break from the norm. Keep up the great work! I can't wait to read what happens next. |
 MadMaz87 2007-04-11 . chapter 11wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow! just wow! loved this chapter so much it hurts lol
i can't think for the life of me what else to say. except wow hehe
luv madmaz -x-
p.s yay go vincent! :D
P.P.S (YUFFENTINE?) :D i'll stop now... |
 Rehime 2007-04-10 . chapter 11Wow, this is getting good. I think I might be a little closer to the edge of my seat.
Good work. |
 Someone2003 2007-04-10 . chapter 11Woah. Never, ever saw that one coming. How did Tseng have access to their bank accounts? What's going on?!
Well, I'm going to stop analyzing. You know full well what you're doing! I'll just sit back and enjoy the ride.
*crosses fingers* *mutters* Happy ending happy ending happy ending . . .
No complaints. Nothing to analyze. Simply, this is great.
Ciao For Now Everyone! |
 Someone2003 2007-04-05 . chapter 10Reno/Yuffie? Well, I like that pairing too.
Ugh! I'm so frustrated with her! She says if Reno were Cloud's friend then he wouldn't have said what he did. Then, she turns around and decides to wash her hands of the entire ordeal even though it concerns every close friend of her's. Yuffie, you're such a terrible person! Stubborn and an idiot till the end!
Wow. You've really gotten me riled up over her. Just wanna' pound her thick head *mumble mutter mumble*
So . . . what happens now?
It's good, but I don't feel like the pace is all that quick.
Ciao For Now Everyone! |
 Rehime 2007-04-05 . chapter 10That chapter must be a god-send to people who like RenoxYuffie.
I liked the depiction of Reno here. The guy is finally showing a little emotion, but in the way only Reno could.
Good work. |
 MadMaz87 2007-04-05 . chapter 10no Reno no! hehe :D poor Vince is in a hospital bed and Reno's doing that! tut tut i wonder why she's holding onto it so desperatly ;D lol
great chapter i love this fic though im still rooting for yuff/vince this fic is just too damn good to give up on! i'll read it what ever happens! like i said great chapter i think the father son relationship between Reno and Tseng is sweet :) i like how you put that in there!
well keep up the good work k
update soon
madmaz -x- |
 MadMaz87 2007-04-02 . chapter 9simply put this is amazing. i love your characterization and your writing style both are superb!
i love it! so interseting and just damn good!
at first i thougt maybe there was some possibility of rufus/yuffie but now im rooting for yuffie/vincent (which im a big fan off ;D) if there is to be any more pairings that is :)
which ever the case i love this fic and i can't wait for youR next update.
madmaz -x- |