This was such an excellent story. I stayed up half the night reading it, cause I just couldn't stop. You conveyed the complexities of both Dean and Sam's emotions so realistically. Your medical explanations never got tedious, so don't worry about that. I actually found the medical aspects of the story to be really fascinating. The journey the boys go on in this fic is heartwrenching in the most satisfying of ways.

I absolutely loved this story!

Oh, this is heartbreaking...
And it's so well written, the emoptions are so real, that I really have tears in my eyes and can feel everything of it!
This is a brilliant story, I Think I said it before, but I have to say it again!
You're a amazing writer!
Thanks so much for sharing this with us!

Hey there! I have to say something to this before the end, because It's so far away. It is difficult to say in this language, but I'll try anyway.
This story is absolutley brilliant!
It is even better than the last one I read from you and I can't help but take all my freetime to read on.
You bring the characters to real life and I can imagine all of it, as if I would be IN this story. It's amazing.
You wrote the psychology aspect of the story perfectly, it all fit so well - the trance, the angst, the anger...
I have the feeling, I'm reading a real BOOK here, not 'only' a fanfiction, and this is much better than many books I read over the years.
I don't know, if it means something to you,'cause you got already so many reviews for this story, but I had to say it!
I love this!!
Thanks for writing and sharing - I'm addictet!

Just finished this story and I LOVED it. I really liked the idea of the hunt. The fact that it was such a challenge was a nice change.

I enjoyed reading about the struggles that both of the boys went through. It felt very real and very in character.

I just have a few thoughts about it. First I noticed quite a few little typos that spell check wouldn't have caught. Numerous uses of "Dam" instead of Sam, and other such mistypings that just got past the spellchecker.

The other thing, and this is my own personal issue, was them using Dean's real name. At this point, Dean is either dead, or wanted. Submitting his real name for state funding, or using it at the rehab hospital wouldn't be a smart thing to do. The authorities would catch on pretty quick I would think.

Other than those things it was an awesome story, and I look forward to going through the rest of your stories here and seeing what else you have written.

Thank you for posting this. I really did enjoy it.

Lady Starhawk

Found your story today and read all 39 chapters. Each chapter was so well written and full of such emotion and depth it was like a little story all by itself. A very well-written job here; the boys were so in character and it was great to have Bobby and Missouri there to support them. And your original characters fit in right throughout your story. Enjoyed it very much and glad I found it. Thanks for writing it and best to you.

I am really sorry that I've stopped reading this fic...and your other fics but real life got in the way and then I really fell behind. However, I'm gonna slowly make my way through the fics...and I just read chapters 14-20...and they were awesome. I'll get to the other chapters soon...either tomorrow or the day after.
hugs...empath

I don't think it's over, he'll try again...

oh, and : "All in all your brother is a lucky man", oh yeah "you werre lucky to pull through" he would say to him, no even thinking that he actually wanted to die...

what ? did he tried to kill himself ?

and I guess, here is how the whole procress of the day is destroyed : Dean'll understand that Missouri was lying to him, and so, he'll think that she was hypocrit the whole day...

wow, good chapter
even funny sometimes, in your description of Dean's act, but really good, as I think he would act like that : pushing everyone far of him, in order to be more free to leave them...

Great, pretty strong.
You had a great idea about Dean's reaction at Sam's departure. I was thinking that he would shut down, completely ;)
Wen

Wow... this is amazing. I mean, well, the story is great. I've been reading it up to this point, regretably not leaving any reviews, but then again, it's finals. *shrugs* but what I saw in this chapter forced me to review. You mentioned Independance Kansas. I actually know some folks who live there and have visited on a number of occasions. I never, ever, thought I'd actually see the town come up in any of the fiction that I read. That's just plain weird.

Normally, I don't review on chapters of a story. I just usually wait for the end if I am going to review a story, but I decided I had to review this chapter at least. I've already skipped to the ending, so I know how it does end, but this chapter, and the fact that the guy that Sam had Dean meet is a former soldier and having a prosthesis I think does help Dean realize he doesn't have to give up hunting fully. It just may take him a while to get used to it.

thanks for this awesome STORY of yours .


Actually , i Loved all your stories , the(re all in my favorites ;)


THX again for ur great work


hope u ll finish " sensory perception " ;)



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